Denim

It took some time, but
eventually the denim
(after much scrubbing)
of my workaday soul
cleaned-up as if stone washed.

Valuable lessons
were tucked into new pockets,
the clucking hens
of a nagging conscience
were at last silenced.

I’m spinning myself dry today,
hanging up my smoking guns.

Her face still riddles me through,
but I patch up just fine,
and know now how to zip her
out of my mind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Rodgers Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 7:19 AM
Hello Eric, That was a really inventive and clever poem. I absolutely loved the central metaphor of using denim and stonewashing to describe the process of emotional cleanup and self-improvement. Excellent! Autumn Blessings, Eric, Daniel
Ashford Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 7:23 PM
Hi Daniel, sorry for the delay in replying, I am travelling. Thank you for this thoughtful and insightful response. It is most appreciated and welcome. E.
Rodgers Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 7:18 AM
Hello Eric, That was a really inventive and clever poem. I absolutely loved the central metaphor of using denim and stonewashing to describe the process of emotional cleanup and self-improvement. Excellent! Autumn Blessings, Eric, Daniel
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