Denial

Young Connor he voyaged The Nile By sailing a live crocodile The beastie went SNAP! And swallowed the chap! Oh well, it was fun for a while.

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Sotto Poet

Date: 11/12/2022 9:39:00 AM

Terry, that's hilarious. Smiles cannot conceal the truth that crocodiles are repulsive. Thanks for your comment on my page.

Terry Miller
Date: 11/13/2022 8:14:00 AM

Thank you for the visit and kind words.

David Kavanagh

Date: 11/12/2022 6:28:00 AM

Connor probably fell for those Croc tears Terry, but hey that’s life, or perhaps death on the Nile, excellent Limerick, cheers David

Terry Miller
Date: 11/13/2022 8:15:00 AM

Thank you, David. I do enjoy writing a limerick!

Deb M

Date: 11/12/2022 5:14:00 AM

Cute and snappy poem Terry….enjoyed! Debx

Terry Miller
Date: 11/13/2022 8:16:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed, Deb; thank you for the visit

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/12/2022 5:03:00 AM

A nice one, Terry:)

Terry Miller
Date: 11/13/2022 8:16:00 AM

Thanks, Jo.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 11/12/2022 4:21:00 AM

LOL That's really funny.

Terry Miller
Date: 11/13/2022 8:16:00 AM

Thank you, Wendy

John Lawless

Date: 11/12/2022 3:47:00 AM

...Young Connor knew he was a crocodile when he got on......as the fox said....

Terry Miller
Date: 11/13/2022 8:17:00 AM

True

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 11/12/2022 2:09:00 AM

Don't be in denial sailing the Nile - Live crocodile may be wearing a smile - But they have a hunch - To eat you for lunch - Smiles can’t hide the fact crocodiles are vile……. Belle

Terry Miller
Date: 11/13/2022 8:17:00 AM

Hi Belle, thanks for the visit