Denial

Young Connor he voyaged The Nile
By sailing a live crocodile
The beastie went SNAP!
And swallowed the chap!
Oh well, it was fun for a while.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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November 12, 2022 at 9:39 AM
Terry, that's hilarious. Smiles cannot conceal the truth that crocodiles are repulsive. Thanks for your comment on my page.
Miller Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 8:14 AM
Thank you for the visit and kind words.
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November 12, 2022 at 6:28 AM
Connor probably fell for those Croc tears Terry, but hey that’s life, or perhaps death on the Nile, excellent Limerick, cheers David
Miller Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 8:15 AM
Thank you, David. I do enjoy writing a limerick!
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November 12, 2022 at 5:14 AM
Cute and snappy poem Terry….enjoyed! Debx
Miller Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 8:16 AM
Glad you enjoyed, Deb; thank you for the visit
Daniel Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 5:03 AM
A nice one, Terry:)
Miller Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 8:16 AM
Thanks, Jo.
Volumes Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 4:21 AM
LOL That's really funny.
Miller Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 8:16 AM
Thank you, Wendy
Lawless Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 3:47 AM
...Young Connor knew he was a crocodile when he got on......as the fox said....
Miller Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 8:17 AM
True
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November 12, 2022 at 2:09 AM
Don't be in denial sailing the Nile - Live crocodile may be wearing a smile - But they have a hunch - To eat you for lunch - Smiles can’t hide the fact crocodiles are vile……. Belle
Miller Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 8:17 AM
Hi Belle, thanks for the visit
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