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Dementia

My dear children don’t bother coming to pray or mourn Whether it’s the hottest sunset or frosted dawn You were supposed to be my kids and help my struggle Living with dementia made life a puzzle Throughout all my senior life you were never there When inheritance was involved you seemed to care You couldn’t shed a tear, not one to spare For your own mother who raised you with love and care What selfish sons you were Knowing my condition it didn’t occur You just left me in a rocking chair To writher away and die in despair Although you are still my only love I’m a blessed angel who watches from above I’m the milky clouds that blow I’m the diamond glints in the snow I’m in each drop of rain And in every ounce of pain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/25/2018 8:33:00 PM
Oh my. Congratulations on your win with this sad, well-written poem. Heartbreaking but so true.
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Date: 6/24/2018 8:19:00 AM
It is a really sad and heartfelt write, you are absolutely right, parents are sincair with us, they care for us but mostly the children are only involved in parents as long as they need them, once they are independent, they think that our parents are a burden on us and want to get rid of them as early as possible, your poem describe the abandonment really beautifully. Many congratulations on your well deserved win in the contest, it sure was a joy to read, good luck
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Date: 6/24/2018 5:42:00 AM
Wow, Daisy. Congrats on your well deserved win. A FAVE for me.
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Date: 6/23/2018 8:31:00 PM
Congratulations ,Daisy, on a great win.. . Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/10/2017 8:09:00 PM
This one broke my heart, Daisy. I am intrigued, particularly by that last stanza. Another great piece! Always, Laura
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Date: 11/4/2017 7:09:00 AM
An emotive piece of writing, Daisy. Dark, but, in many ways...strangely beautiful. Pleased to make your acquaintance! :) john
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Daisy Tyrrell
Date: 11/4/2017 2:58:00 PM
thankyou x
Date: 11/3/2017 7:29:00 PM
Wow - very touchy subjects. Well crafted poem.
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Date: 10/31/2017 5:16:00 PM
Hello Daisy, A very powerful poem of sadness and bitterness. I don't know if your story is based on fact or fiction, but I suspect to a lot of people is very real. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem, kind regards, Kevin
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