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Delusion - Sedoka Rhymed

Blindfold sight of life
whirl hues delusion that branch
out, with waves of pouring fears     
Voices, colors strife
a deluded avalanche,
there’s no one that sees or hears 

1/8/2016


Poetry Contest:  Something Different-SEDOKA FORM (Rhymed)  
 Sponsored by: Laura Loo

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/28/2016 9:10:00 PM Eve, Congrats on your interesting win. Love LINDA - Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/19/2016 3:59:00 PM a deep one here!! Congrats on a fine win, Eve. Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 1/18/2016 10:37:00 AM EVE, Congrats on your "SEDOKA FORM (Rhymed) winning poem." love SKAT** Login to Reply

Beautiful Scars Date: 1/18/2016 10:12:00 AM Eve, I really love this poem, as I always love your poems :) Thank you for being a part if my contest *smiles* -luloo Login to Reply

Scott Thirtyseven Date: 1/11/2016 7:18:00 AM and you made it rhyme. Kudos to you. Best of luck in the contest. Login to Reply

Etienne Lariviere Date: 1/10/2016 12:03:00 AM Very nice poem xoxo Login to Reply

Dalia Shahein Date: 1/9/2016 8:20:00 PM Very creative and beautiful , best of luck in the contest with this lovely write , hugs / / :) dalia Login to Reply

Arthur Vaso Date: 1/9/2016 8:11:00 PM Eve this is so creative, this is art and poetry in one! Loved this! Login to Reply

Eric Boddie Date: 1/9/2016 11:59:00 AM it seems to fit like a hand in glove....with misguided pushes that shove....sometimes it leads others to think they are above....but there is only one thing you can be sure of....eric wont be delusional for anything but True Love....wonderful write eve....;) Login to Reply

White Sage Date: 1/9/2016 1:25:00 AM beautiful write Eve, best of luck in the contest Login to Reply