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Delusion - Sedoka Rhymed

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Blindfold sight of life whirl hues delusion that branch out, with waves of pouring fears Voices, colors strife a deluded avalanche, there’s no one that sees or hears 1/8/2016 Poetry Contest: Something Different-SEDOKA FORM (Rhymed) Sponsored by: Laura Loo

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/28/2016 9:10:00 PM

Eve, Congrats on your interesting win. Love LINDA -

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/19/2016 3:59:00 PM

a deep one here!! Congrats on a fine win, Eve.

Skat A

Date: 1/18/2016 10:37:00 AM

EVE, Congrats on your "SEDOKA FORM (Rhymed) winning poem." love SKAT**

Lu Loo

Date: 1/18/2016 10:12:00 AM

Eve, I really love this poem, as I always love your poems :) Thank you for being a part if my contest *smiles* -luloo

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 1/11/2016 7:18:00 AM

and you made it rhyme. Kudos to you. Best of luck in the contest.

Etienne Lariviere

Date: 1/10/2016 12:03:00 AM

Very nice poem xoxo

Dalia Shahein

Date: 1/9/2016 8:20:00 PM

Very creative and beautiful , best of luck in the contest with this lovely write , hugs / / :) dalia

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/9/2016 8:11:00 PM

Eve this is so creative, this is art and poetry in one! Loved this!

Eric Boddie

Date: 1/9/2016 11:59:00 AM

it seems to fit like a hand in glove....with misguided pushes that shove....sometimes it leads others to think they are above....but there is only one thing you can be sure of....eric wont be delusional for anything but True Love....wonderful write eve....;)

White Sage

Date: 1/9/2016 1:25:00 AM

beautiful write Eve, best of luck in the contest