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Delirium

 
time alone
I used to love
with bliss
serenity
like sea waves crashing_
but not this
madness
this panic_
I am
a caged bird
a girl with
delirium and
a hurricane of thoughts
and
images of death_

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May 21, 2020


Poetry/Yalto/Delirium
Copyright Protected, ID 20-1253-820-03
All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France


Written for the contest, Pick-A-Title, Vol. 18, Yalto 2
Sponsor, Edward Ebeh, Theme chosen #2 Delirium

Third Place

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Sam Kauffman Date: 6/8/2020 3:26:00 PM Panic and "a hurricane of thoughts" describe this state of mind so well, my friend. Congratulations on your winning placement! Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 6/8/2020 4:43:00 PM Sam, thanks for the visit, comment and congratulations _Constance

Aditi Mishra Date: 6/8/2020 7:35:00 AM Back to congratulate you on your win Constance :) Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 6/8/2020 4:43:00 PM Aditi, thanks for the congratulations _Constance

Reason A. Poteet Date: 6/7/2020 7:32:00 PM You pictured it well, Constance. We are all learning new ways to cope with the lesser of two evils...disease vs. discontent. Panic fits well with delirium. Congratulations on a fine yalto and your placement. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 6/8/2020 4:44:00 PM Reason, thanks for the comment and the congratulations_Constance

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/7/2020 3:04:00 PM my thoughts almost exactly, Dear Heart. Love how you captured that feeling. Congrats in the contest and thanks for my win in your spirit animal contest. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 6/8/2020 4:44:00 PM Andrea, thanks for the comment and congrats and your welcome on the win _Constance

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/7/2020 2:02:00 PM - A great and creative 3rd place ... congratulations so much, Constance :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 6/8/2020 4:45:00 PM Anne-Lise, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations _Constance

Edward Ibeh Date: 6/7/2020 7:08:00 AM Congratulations on your podium finish with this wonderful Yalto, Constance:-) Dark poems are definitely your forte! Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 6/8/2020 4:46:00 PM Edward, thanks for the contest and my placement, oh yes dark poetry is my thing _Constance

Kai Michael Neumann Date: 5/29/2020 4:50:00 AM I like that. Trees are friends ... Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 6/8/2020 4:47:00 PM Kai, thanks for the visit and the compliment _Constance

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/25/2020 10:50:00 AM I know how you feel, Dear Heart. I have been writing darker poetry from all this stuff as well!! Sure wish you'd see your Soupmail!! Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 6/8/2020 4:47:00 PM Andrea, thanks for visiting, and for the soupmail _Constance

Aditi Mishra Date: 5/22/2020 6:25:00 AM I can relate to the emotions flowing throughout this poem. I guess it happens with people who crave solitude. We love the peace it brings but are haunted by recurring thoughts, some of which are bizzare. All the best :) Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 6/8/2020 4:48:00 PM Aditi, thanks for visiting and the comment, appreciate _Constance

Caren Krutsinger Date: 5/21/2020 8:18:00 PM love the 'caged bird' in this poem. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 6/8/2020 4:48:00 PM Caren, thanks for the visit and compliment _Constance