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Deliquesce

I gaze over landscapes, whitewashed in the moonlight with bittersweet etchings only pale sketches, of what has been left behind Distorting places I once knew, under a veil of haze, that swallows time I can't distinguish what is myth, or glazed over in my mind Where the ink, has been left bereft, has bleached away, and taken verse and rhyme I know the moon is high, somewhere, caught in the winter's snow of sleep bemused that the clouds are obscuring the light, It flickers dim, bleaching the night, until all the words are gone The sound is mute, the color lost, and cannot stay around It fades away, in shades of gray, like words to all your songs Words once known, like the back of my hands ....lost in the timeless winds I can't recall, I can't rewind, the lyrics known so well I stretch my neck, and try to hear where all the moonlit songs begin They disappear, and things we love, are bleached until they're pale With stars that spin, a picture dims, too thin to be recalled Too much to ask?....... I'm asking why.....It's me who needs to know... Will you know me? Will I know you?.... ......if we should meet again? __________________________________________________ 5/29/14 For the Contest "Debussy Inspired" Sponsored by Craig Cornish

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Date: 8/7/2014 9:49:00 PM
What a beautiful tour-de-force. You evoke a lovely nighttime, emotional landscape.
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Date: 6/17/2014 5:05:00 PM
Dear Carrie, May your ink never fade. Poetry like this will withstand the test of time. Written as only you could do. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/17/2014 3:54:00 PM
Carrie, I do love reading your poetry...you never fail to delight and inspire. Congratulations.
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Date: 5/29/2014 4:01:00 PM
I so enjoyed reading this Carrie its imagery is superb.Craig will love this Carrie it will do really well. Hugs Jan xx
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