Delineation

I visited your house,
 and its face
 devoured by vines
 left me desolate 

I remembered
 hurrying to live,
 your hands
 cracked,
 they now lay
 crumbled
 to dust

The mysteries
 scoring your face,
 pitting the pores,
 mimicking skin,
 are now forever
 closed in pine. 

Suddenly beauty rose
 in your wild garden,
 and dragonflies
 grazed my mind,
 I silently conceded
 with a sigh,

That the equation
 and the totality
 of your lifetime,
 will now never
 be solved.

Some conundrums
 are pure splendor,
 and shall in no time
 be deciphered.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Pettit Avatar
March 1, 2014 at 2:07 PM
You have pervasive descriptiveness in this write that easily places a vivid image of the house in my mind.
Eggins Avatar
March 8, 2014 at 8:56 AM
Thanks Robert for taking the journey with me love Jayne x
Callus Avatar
February 28, 2014 at 3:55 PM
Great poem; adore the ending and the tempo.
Eggins Avatar
March 1, 2014 at 6:48 AM
Thanks Paul very happy you like it :) love Jayne x
Williams Avatar
February 28, 2014 at 9:42 AM
Jayne I love the unfinished tone in this, it is right some questions are never answered, well done....David
Eggins Avatar
February 28, 2014 at 9:50 AM
Thanks David it is always unfinished and most of the big questions will never be solved, in our lifetimes anyway love Jayne x
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