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Delights of Love

Delights of Love

Secrets of the garden are unexpressed delights,
lovers share in sweetness that’s near to paradise.

To see your love's visage, pleasing joy of the eyes,
the cherished persona of your true treasured prize,
and have a joy of heart, where fondness truly lies.

The melody of love is the voice of a kiss,
that follows with a sigh and is eternal bliss.

Reach inside the rapture to let your spirit free
as wonderment captures the moments yet to see.

Touching your love's person, exchanging energy
Blending pastel auras in beloved synergy
Moving to dimensions that are greater in degree

Secrets of the garden are there for hearts to find.
Come into the essence and leave the world behind.
 
11/4/16

'STRAND SELECT S
Brian Strand, Sponsor  2nd place

Copyright © Janis Medders Tobechi | Year Posted 2016

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Susan Ashley Date: 8/6/2017 8:01:00 PM Hi Janice, romantic poetry at its finest. Congratulations on your win! :) Login to Reply

Peggy Sharretts Date: 12/14/2016 3:34:00 PM I loved your poem. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 12/14/2016 3:40:00 PM Thanks Peggy. I appreciate your comment. Be Blessed, Janis.

Darren White Date: 12/14/2016 2:44:00 AM Such a wonderful alexandrine, I should try to write one, I like it. Congratulations :) Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 12/14/2016 10:22:00 PM I'm sure you can. Can't wait to see it.

Constance La France Date: 12/13/2016 1:53:00 PM Janis, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned poem, I really like the form and think I will attempt to write one, well done ~ Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 12/13/2016 11:36:00 PM Thanks, Broken Wings. You have come up with one original idea for contests. Moving on to B now.

Afzal Nusker Date: 12/13/2016 8:09:00 AM Exceptional! congrats on your win. A 7 and a fav. Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 12/13/2016 11:38:00 PM Thanks Afzal. I really appreciate the rating and the fav. Blessings to you. Janis

Constance La France Date: 11/15/2016 9:57:00 AM Janis this is lovely CONGRATULATIONS. Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 11/16/2016 4:48:00 PM Thanks for your encouragement, Broken Wings.

Sandra Haight Date: 11/15/2016 9:23:00 AM Janis, back to congratulate you again on another win for your beautiful poem! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 11/16/2016 4:48:00 PM Thanks, Sandra. Hugs and blessings, Janis.

Joanna Daniel Date: 11/15/2016 7:03:00 AM Absolutely delighting:) congratulations, Janis:) Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 11/16/2016 4:49:00 PM Thanks and blessings, Janis.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 11/14/2016 9:58:00 PM Delightful, Janice! Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 11/16/2016 4:50:00 PM Thanks and blessings, Janis.

Augustus Black Date: 11/6/2016 3:53:00 AM Great logical poem. You are quite a talented writer. Well done for this..... and Congratulation for the win. Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 11/6/2016 2:48:00 PM Thanks Augustus. You are the only person who's ever said that to me. It's beautiful.

Heidi Sands Date: 11/5/2016 5:37:00 PM Congratulations . Beautiful! Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 11/5/2016 5:46:00 PM Thanks, Heidi.

Sandra Haight Date: 11/5/2016 5:04:00 PM Very lovely, emotional words about love, Janis. Congratulations on your fine placement on this short list of winners. Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 11/5/2016 5:47:00 PM Thanks, Sandra. Hugs and blessings, Janis.

Constance La France Date: 11/5/2016 4:42:00 PM Janis congratulations on your win with this wonderful write ~ Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 11/5/2016 5:48:00 PM Thanks, Broken Wings.

Janice Canerdy Date: 11/5/2016 3:29:00 PM A 7 for your lovely, winning poem, Janis. Janice Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 11/5/2016 5:49:00 PM Thanks for the rating and the comments, Janis.