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Delightful Day of Birth

D-elightful day of birth I-s keeping the clouds from turning gray; A-ugust ninth early morn, N-ight shadows shall fade A-way. A-nother day of gladness B-ecomes part of your life; R-apture brought by birth I-s here to win O-ver the strife. O-verwhelming merry mood P-erfectly pleases your heart; E-very greeting from friends R-ekindles the new fresh start. A-llow the dawn to break, R-ising to bring much mirth; I-n the sky the sun will shine O-n delightful day of birth.

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Laura Howard

Date: 9/24/2023 11:15:00 AM

So many hide behind different masks. We never know what a person is going to do or going through, yes we need to come out through it all with radiance. Loved this piece you wrote here.

Laura Howard

Date: 9/24/2023 11:10:00 AM

It doesnt flow with clarity as it should. You should make it flow, I get what you're trying to say, but the wording needs to be edited somewhat. Hope you understand this. Just trying to help you.

Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 9/25/2023 3:48:00 AM

Thanks, dear Ma'am Laura for the constructive comments. I really appreciate it. I still learn to write good poetry.