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Defrosting Ice

DEFROSTING ICE temperatures soar behind closed doors red hot touches oozing from pores CHAMPAGNE BUCKET she reaches across his body taut hand dips as seduction is sought ICE CUBES a single block strategically placed defrost drips as muscles are traced © October 2013—Kim van Breda

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Justin Bordner

Date: 10/22/2014 8:27:00 PM

Such an extremely naughty technique of arousal Kim! Seductive improvising, I'm enamored by the thought of this ice upon my body. The erogeny of temperatures, this is memorable poetry Kim...J.A.B.

Kim Van Breda
Date: 10/23/2014 2:57:00 AM

Well Mr. J.A.B. You went and found my 'defrosting ice'-- I'm flattered. Seductive improvising indeed :) Every now and then I go off on a tangent to write a.... ummmm... lets say "passionate" piece. This is acceptable on P/Soup.... I don't think my others would be. It's all creative expression I know, but when I want to 'say it like it is' I do-- may offend some. I have been practicing writing "Rictameters"-- two of which... "Release" and "Desire" are borderline.