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Defrosting Ice

DEFROSTING ICE

temperatures soar behind closed
doors
red hot touches oozing from
pores

CHAMPAGNE BUCKET

she reaches across his body
taut
hand dips as seduction is
sought

ICE CUBES

a single block strategically
placed
defrost drips as muscles are
traced

© October 2013—Kim van Breda

Copyright © Kim Van Breda | Year Posted 2013

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Justin Bordner Date: 10/22/2014 8:27:00 PM Such an extremely naughty technique of arousal Kim! Seductive improvising, I'm enamored by the thought of this ice upon my body. The erogeny of temperatures, this is memorable poetry Kim...J.A.B. Login to Reply Kim Van Breda Date: 10/23/2014 2:57:00 AM Well Mr. J.A.B. You went and found my 'defrosting ice'-- I'm flattered. Seductive improvising indeed :) Every now and then I go off on a tangent to write a.... ummmm... lets say "passionate" piece. This is acceptable on P/Soup.... I don't think my others would be. It's all creative expression I know, but when I want to 'say it like it is' I do-- may offend some. I have been practicing writing "Rictameters"-- two of which... "Release" and "Desire" are borderline.

Wayland Bunch Date: 1/7/2014 9:17:00 PM Well against all odds there is always a certain power of persuasion lol. Nice powerful write. Login to Reply

Litan Dey Date: 10/22/2013 1:50:00 PM This is so good.....hand dips as seduction is sought,loved it Login to Reply Kim Van Breda Date: 10/22/2013 1:52:00 PM Hmmmm... one of my "naughtier" writes. but thanks for the compliment.

Karen Anglesey Date: 10/22/2013 9:51:00 AM Perfect descriptive action make the portrait of the ice come alive. The poem form is one I hadn't heard of. Very nicely written. Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 10/13/2013 12:28:00 PM Kim, I love this journey of the human emotions, they link together with such ease, very well done...David Login to Reply

Jacob Cra Date: 10/12/2013 7:08:00 PM Wow! Fantastic! Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 10/9/2013 8:38:00 AM ooooh I just love this one Kim :) Login to Reply

David Fisher Date: 10/9/2013 7:29:00 AM This surely warms more than the heart...have never tried Imagism but certainly like your stories. Login to Reply

Delysia Hendricks Date: 10/8/2013 9:46:00 PM Ooh-la-la, a hottie for sure. Well done, Kim. Soupmail Licia :-) Login to Reply

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 10/8/2013 11:37:00 AM Wonderfully done! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/8/2013 11:15:00 AM ... love it, Kim !!! <3 - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Ken Carroll Date: 10/8/2013 10:01:00 AM Hi Kim, A sensual write for sure..Thanks for visiting my verse.. Ken Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 10/8/2013 8:51:00 AM Wow......hot indeed.... Login to Reply