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Deer Crossing

The warning sign says there are deer Which might just cross ahead. By hitting one, you’ll smash your car; The deer may end up dead. The only deer I come across Are those already hit. With open eyes, they look surprised, At least a little bit. I’m certain as they leaped across The road to meet their death, They didn’t realize they were close To taking their last breath. I wonder ‘bout the drivers, though, And, too, their bashed-up rides. There might be damage to their psyches, Down the road, besides. You never really can prepare When deer decide to cross. Despite the signs, when one is hit, It’s everybody’s loss.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/9/2015 7:35:00 PM
Catchy write Ilene.
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Date: 6/30/2015 10:16:00 AM
Deer are beautiful creatures. And mostly docile. Now you know why young hunters get buck fever. Meaning they can't take the shot.
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Date: 6/29/2015 11:47:00 AM
I just love reading your poems, Ilene. You still don't have an anthology of them all? We have this happen a lot in Utah. I recall a winter long long ago . For some reason the deer were rampant on the icy canyon road. I recall seeing at least ten deer lying in the road as we tried to travel home. I felt I was in a Stephen King novel!! night of the Deer.
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