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Deeper Than Blue

Deeper than blue,I have journeyed All the while,honesty has held the door... open No need for guesswork,or follow the numbers I have danced,between lines and still I remained... naked Yet your hurtful ways have dressed me In a cloak of tattered silence Afraid to move,I just might break Threads of once my very finest It seems my dance of colours Has faded and lost it's two step shine I'll never forget the faltered beat But I will forgive...in time Deeper than blue,you have sent me Still... honesty holds the door I'll always dance naked between the lines One day,you'll hurt me no more

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/8/2010 10:22:00 AM
deeper than blue is quite deep. i enjoyed your poem of true sadness. it does pain greatly when someone you have great love for is so cold. wonderful write.hope to here from you, Chenoa. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 4/7/2010 4:21:00 PM
Indeed a sad write, with an element of beauty >> James
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Date: 4/5/2010 8:41:00 PM
Thank you all so much for your kind words.I really appreciate the time you have taken xx
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Date: 4/5/2010 11:12:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Chenoa. Please continue to write and share with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/5/2010 4:10:00 AM
sad writng, Is shiningwater a real name or pen name? sounds native american.
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Date: 4/5/2010 3:08:00 AM
beautiful pen baby !
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