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Deeper Than Blue

Deeper than blue,I have journeyed
All the while,honesty has held the door...

open

No need for guesswork,or follow the numbers
I have danced,between lines and still I remained...

naked

Yet your hurtful ways have dressed me
In a cloak of tattered silence
Afraid to move,I just might break
Threads of once my very finest

It seems my dance of colours
Has faded and lost it's two step shine
I'll never forget the faltered beat
But I will forgive...in time

Deeper than blue,you have sent me
Still...
honesty holds the door

I'll always dance naked between the lines
One day,you'll hurt me no more

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/8/2010 10:22:00 AM
deeper than blue is quite deep. i enjoyed your poem of true sadness. it does pain greatly when someone you have great love for is so cold. wonderful write.hope to here from you, Chenoa. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 4/7/2010 4:21:00 PM
Indeed a sad write, with an element of beauty >> James
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Date: 4/5/2010 8:41:00 PM
Thank you all so much for your kind words.I really appreciate the time you have taken xx
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Date: 4/5/2010 11:12:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Chenoa. Please continue to write and share with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/5/2010 4:10:00 AM
sad writng, Is shiningwater a real name or pen name? sounds native american.
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Date: 4/5/2010 3:08:00 AM
beautiful pen baby !
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