Deeper Darker Downward

It’s a heavy world we're stuck to
Pushing us down in the crust
Until our bodies, bent from the weight,
are disposed of in the dust
Day by day, our shoulders slump 
Lower the longer we live
Maroon bags pull down our faces
Short falls shatter our hips
Spines crush from the pressure 
Of the boulders on our backs
The skin below us ripples
And we tumble through its cracks
Deeper darker downward go
To the place we all are drawn
Where the sun stops its rise and set
And there is no dusk nor dawn
The blackest of the depths calls
We cannot resist the urge
Into the hollow hole, we dive
Drowning, we submerge
Descending in this heavy world
We burrow in the crust
Exceeding the abyss before us
Mistakenly thinking we must. 

Jessica Highstreet
10/14/15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 11/1/2015 8:29:00 AM
A very powerful dark piece.
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Date: 10/15/2015 10:07:00 AM
Very thoughtful with multiple interpretations.
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Date: 10/14/2015 12:35:00 PM
Lovely poem love the way you wrote it. Death calls as we fall into the dirt we come from
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Daniel Perez
Date: 10/14/2015 2:57:00 PM
Your welcome Jessica
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Jessica Highstreet
Date: 10/14/2015 1:27:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel!
Date: 10/14/2015 11:35:00 AM
it is easy to rise yet the desire to fall....the lie has been told and we answer that call....before I let it happen to me however....I will Hold On To God, we are always Together....;)
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Jessica Highstreet
Date: 10/14/2015 1:28:00 PM
Love your reply! A dialogue in poetry!
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