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Deeper

I grab the knife, As if its nothing. I know it can take my life away, but I could care less. I put the knife into my skin. I cant feel a thing. I stab it in deeper, the memories are floating back. Us walking into the streets, holding hands, you whispering "I love you" I can feel the blood gushing out, but theres no pain. I remember laying in your arms, I remember every word you said. I stab the knife in deeper. I try not to shout. The deeper it goes, the more memories come out. I've never seen so much blood in my life, all because memories of us. I just cant believe your okay. I take the knife out and throw it. Watching the blood come out, it doesn't phase me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/20/2010 1:43:00 PM
Someone once said, "Suicide is a permanent solution to a temporary situation. Think about that. Permanent solution! We humans are complex creatures. We are stuck in our own skin; we can only work with the equipment we were born with, even so, faulty or not, if ones stands back and takes a good look at what's going on around them with clear objectivity, they will be able to judge rightly whether the then deemed insignificant merits the action about to be taken; you need to look out of skin. Patty
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