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My, oh my, Butterflies, Deep in blooms, Chasing fumes. Color play, Golden day, Honeyed noon, Still lagoon. My, oh my, Green surprise, On cream rose, Cawing crows! Under clouds, Colored crowds. High and low, Go! Go! Go! My, oh my, Plum goodbyes, In the wood, Long endured. Whimsy roams, Meadow homes, Satin wings, Lilac queens. My, oh my, Sunset sky! Jasmine June, Velvet moon, Red wings, blue, Orange too. Beauty's here, Triumph year!

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Date: 8/31/2021 12:59:00 PM
A brilliantly written poem, Evelyn, your wonderful words come from the heart and easily reach our hearts. I love the picture too. Blessings
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/31/2021 4:45:00 PM
I am glad to hear those inspiriting sentiments, Lasaad. Thank you for the words of delight. Hugs.
Date: 8/31/2021 4:12:00 AM
Nicely done Evelyn. Love the pic. God Bless and thanks for the lovely reviews. Could use some prayer if you don't mind. JB
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/31/2021 9:40:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words, Judy. I am happy to have you in my prayers. :)
Date: 8/30/2021 10:41:00 PM
Brilliant rhyme. You are so good at these poems. Best for a win.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/31/2021 9:41:00 AM
Thank you for brightening my day. :)
Date: 8/30/2021 5:53:00 PM
Well done rhyme with a few words in each line, Evelyn... great job
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/30/2021 7:44:00 PM
Thank you for your thoughtful comment, Eve. :)

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