Deep Kissing Mary

it tried to deep kiss Mary now her lips are hairy


"Cat got your tongue?" 
Written under duress 1/5/18
Cliche contest
Hosted by Silent One
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Mccall Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 12:43 PM
poor, poor Mary with her lips all harry, or should that be hairy? congratulations on your 2nd place win.
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January 20, 2018 at 7:19 PM
Thank you, Edward.
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January 9, 2018 at 11:32 PM
Lol, that was funny... lol... linda
Tripp Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 9:04 AM
Thank you, Linda, Dear. I promise to make it around to browse your writing soon.
Roper Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 6:29 PM
Well done, Rhoda. Congratulations on your 1 liner poem . Hugs Eve ~`*
Tripp Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 7:47 PM
Thank you, Sweetie. Hugs multiplied and returned.
Dietrich Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 6:32 PM
hahaha. This is great humor. Congrats for your win on a poem done under duress!!
Tripp Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 7:00 PM
Lol. Thank you, Andrea. It's a tad bit of a "thinker" but I think you got it! ;-)
Ashley Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 5:30 PM
Lol! Your humor shines in this brilliant monoku Rhonda. Congratulations for your wonderful win with your witty take on an old cliche. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Tripp Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 6:26 PM
Thank you, Dear Susan. You words are like sunshine in an otherwise bleak Michigan winter day.
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January 7, 2018 at 10:09 PM
Congrats on Win, this was so cute!
Tripp Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 10:36 PM
Thank you so much Arthur
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January 7, 2018 at 11:44 AM
Congratulations on your win. This definitely is a great and funny poem!
Tripp Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 11:55 AM
Thank you, Dear James. You are so very supportive of my writing and I appreciate that.
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January 6, 2018 at 5:26 PM
Your 'tongue in cheek' humour is such fun to read, Rhoda:) Superb take on this chlice` you chose. Congratulations on this fine win. Regards // paul
Tripp Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 8:15 PM
Thank you so much, Paul. You are a valued friend, My Dear.
May Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 3:12 PM
Congrats on your win Rhoda
Tripp Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 8:12 PM
Thank you, Joseph. Much appreciated.
Andresen Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 1:44 PM
- Congratulations Rhoda, on your great second place in the contest :) - Lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Tripp Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 8:12 PM
Thank you, Sunshine! (I love that). Your friendship, Anne-Lise, is a blessing. You have yourself a lovely weekend as well, my Dear.
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January 6, 2018 at 11:55 AM
Congrats on your win, Rhoda. Love your "written under duress" comment.
Tripp Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 12:27 PM
Lol...Thanks, Line. I always try to throw a little humor in somewhere. Thank you for your comments and encouragement. You are very appreciated.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 11:07 AM
Cute one. Good luck in the contest.
Tripp Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 11:30 AM
Thank you, Richard. You are very kind. Took a second. Yay!
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January 6, 2018 at 10:34 AM
Cats are very lovable animals.The picture with the poem is outstanding.
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January 6, 2018 at 11:29 AM
Thank you, Alfred. Your visits and comments are very much appreciated.
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January 6, 2018 at 9:58 AM
Love your sense of humor, Rhoda, congrats! John
Tripp Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 11:28 AM
Thank you, Dear. Congratulations on your win as well. Loved yours!
One Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 9:30 AM
Lol... Congratulations on your placement in the cliche monoku contest Rhoda..
Tripp Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 11:28 AM
Thank you so much, Silent. I am humbled. Thank you so much for hosting.
Y. Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 3:45 AM
Hi Rhoda, You've penned a good and funny limerick. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Tripp Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 11:26 AM
Thank you, Dear Alexis. Glad you enjoyed it. Took a second. Yay!
Godwin Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 12:23 AM
Very clever you clever girl. soup mail CayCay
Tripp Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 11:21 AM
Hi Doll! We took seconds (reminds me of Thanksgiving dinner) Congratulations my Dearheart. <3
Inman Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 12:04 AM
Rhoda, you made smile. I wonder how many women feel that way about their hairy faced husbands.
Tripp Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 11:20 AM
I'm glad I could make you smile. When I do that, I feel successful. Thank you for the comment. I'm not going to take the bait on the husband comment, lol!
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January 5, 2018 at 10:34 PM
L O L! That is so funny! love it :) my best to you Rhoda :) xo mo!
Tripp Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 10:51 PM
Did it take a little ciphering? Lol. Thanks so much for your kindness, Maureen. <3
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January 5, 2018 at 9:29 PM
Adorable, Rhoda! Janice
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January 5, 2018 at 10:10 PM
Thank you, Janice, Dear.
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January 5, 2018 at 7:57 PM
Lol! Too funny cute... I love it! Good luck in the contest Rhoda.. hugs and smiles :)
Tripp Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 8:17 PM
Thank you, Akkina. These monoku contest...I'm addicted!
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