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Deep Kissing Mary

it tried to deep kiss Mary now her lips are hairy "Cat got your tongue?" Written under duress 1/5/18 Cliche contest Hosted by Silent One

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Edward Mccall

Date: 1/18/2018 12:43:00 PM

poor, poor Mary with her lips all harry, or should that be hairy? congratulations on your 2nd place win.

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/20/2018 7:19:00 PM

Thank you, Edward.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/9/2018 11:32:00 PM

Lol, that was funny... lol... linda

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/10/2018 9:04:00 AM

Thank you, Linda, Dear. I promise to make it around to browse your writing soon.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/9/2018 6:29:00 PM

Well done, Rhoda. Congratulations on your 1 liner poem . Hugs Eve ~`*

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/9/2018 7:47:00 PM

Thank you, Sweetie. Hugs multiplied and returned.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2018 6:32:00 PM

hahaha. This is great humor. Congrats for your win on a poem done under duress!!

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/8/2018 7:00:00 PM

Lol. Thank you, Andrea. It's a tad bit of a "thinker" but I think you got it! ;-)

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/8/2018 5:30:00 PM

Lol! Your humor shines in this brilliant monoku Rhonda. Congratulations for your wonderful win with your witty take on an old cliche. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/8/2018 6:26:00 PM

Thank you, Dear Susan. You words are like sunshine in an otherwise bleak Michigan winter day.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/7/2018 10:09:00 PM

Congrats on Win, this was so cute!

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/7/2018 10:36:00 PM

Thank you so much Arthur

James Swartz

Date: 1/7/2018 11:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. This definitely is a great and funny poem!

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/7/2018 11:55:00 AM

Thank you, Dear James. You are so very supportive of my writing and I appreciate that.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/6/2018 5:26:00 PM

Your 'tongue in cheek' humour is such fun to read, Rhoda:) Superb take on this chlice` you chose. Congratulations on this fine win. Regards // paul

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/6/2018 8:15:00 PM

Thank you so much, Paul. You are a valued friend, My Dear.

Joseph May

Date: 1/6/2018 3:12:00 PM

Congrats on your win Rhoda

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/6/2018 8:12:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph. Much appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/6/2018 1:44:00 PM

- Congratulations Rhoda, on your great second place in the contest :) - Lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/6/2018 8:12:00 PM

Thank you, Sunshine! (I love that). Your friendship, Anne-Lise, is a blessing. You have yourself a lovely weekend as well, my Dear.

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/6/2018 11:55:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Rhoda. Love your "written under duress" comment.

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/6/2018 12:27:00 PM

Lol...Thanks, Line. I always try to throw a little humor in somewhere. Thank you for your comments and encouragement. You are very appreciated.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/6/2018 11:07:00 AM

Cute one. Good luck in the contest.

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/6/2018 11:30:00 AM

Thank you, Richard. You are very kind. Took a second. Yay!

Alfred Berggren

Date: 1/6/2018 10:34:00 AM

Cats are very lovable animals.The picture with the poem is outstanding.

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/6/2018 11:29:00 AM

Thank you, Alfred. Your visits and comments are very much appreciated.

John Gondolf

Date: 1/6/2018 9:58:00 AM

Love your sense of humor, Rhoda, congrats! John

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/6/2018 11:28:00 AM

Thank you, Dear. Congratulations on your win as well. Loved yours!

Silent One

Date: 1/6/2018 9:30:00 AM

Lol... Congratulations on your placement in the cliche monoku contest Rhoda..

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/6/2018 11:28:00 AM

Thank you so much, Silent. I am humbled. Thank you so much for hosting.

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/6/2018 3:45:00 AM

Hi Rhoda, You've penned a good and funny limerick. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/6/2018 11:26:00 AM

Thank you, Dear Alexis. Glad you enjoyed it. Took a second. Yay!

Caycay Jennings

Date: 1/6/2018 12:23:00 AM

Very clever you clever girl. soup mail CayCay

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/6/2018 11:21:00 AM

Hi Doll! We took seconds (reminds me of Thanksgiving dinner) Congratulations my Dearheart. <3

James Inman

Date: 1/6/2018 12:04:00 AM

Rhoda, you made smile. I wonder how many women feel that way about their hairy faced husbands.

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/6/2018 11:20:00 AM

I'm glad I could make you smile. When I do that, I feel successful. Thank you for the comment. I'm not going to take the bait on the husband comment, lol!