Deep Freeze

 Many scientists worked all through the night
 To cross a snowman with a vampire's bite
 They thought it would be a breeze
 But then their fingers did freeze
 And all of them ended up with frostbite
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Kendrick Avatar
January 1, 2026 at 4:30 PM
I have read your winning work and find it to be creative and descriptive. Back with congratulations on your poem being on the winner's list. Way to go. Sara K
Kitchin Avatar
December 31, 2025 at 4:23 PM
Joseph, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute and clever limerick.
Goldsmith Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 9:23 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun "Deep Freeze" Limerick write again. Have a Very Blessed New Year 2026 writing away................
Daniel Avatar
December 29, 2025 at 4:44 AM
Lovely lim, Joseph:) happy new year wishes:)
Gasun Avatar
December 27, 2025 at 8:39 PM
Excellent limerick my dear poet friend. Thanks a lot for sharing. Thanks a lot also for my win in your latest contest. I also want to greet you ane your family an advance Happy New Year 2026
Kendrick Avatar
December 27, 2025 at 2:11 PM
I like this one. I got a chuckle out of it. If for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K
Dietrich Avatar
December 27, 2025 at 12:46 PM
Joseph thanks for the excellent contest called Frosty. It was the perfect prompt for adding to the festiveness of the season.
Canerdy Avatar
December 27, 2025 at 8:40 AM
Good one, Joseph! Janice
Peck Avatar
December 22, 2025 at 8:02 AM
What a clever limerick, Joseph! It takes a bite out of winter.
Dietrich Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 12:25 PM
Yikes. A bite of freezing weather. Nicely done
George Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 12:29 AM
Indeed a fun write. Your imagination has worked in an interesting way. All the best dear Joseph. Wish you a Happy Christmas in advance.
Buhagiar Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 1:28 AM
This limerick is hilarious. Loved it.
Rodgers Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 11:51 AM
Hello Joe, I enjoyed the playful absurdity of this limerick, the idea of mixing a snowman with a vampire’s bite is delightfully offbeat. What a fun seasonal write that makes science feel like mischief. Holiday, Blessings, Joe, Daniel
Goldsmith Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 10:27 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun write. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a fun day writing away............
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