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we’re all damaged goods to some extent our stories are unique yet share so much in common there’s a hurt little child somewhere deep down forever craving to be consoled forever longing for love AP: 1st place 2021 Posted on August 26, 2021

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Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 8/26/2021 11:53:00 PM

It's a sad thought but very true..Delice

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/27/2021 3:24:00 PM

Thanks, Delice ~ much appreciated

Mohamed Omar

Date: 8/26/2021 1:29:00 PM

So true ,so beautifully put. Thanks

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/26/2021 3:48:00 PM

Thank you so much, Mohamed ~

L Milton Hankins

Date: 8/26/2021 8:22:00 AM

Fine expression of the truth, Line. We all need more love to console that inner "little child."

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/26/2021 3:48:00 PM

Absolutely ~ thanks, Milton