Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

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Deep Down

we’re all damaged goods
to some extent
our stories are unique
yet share so much in common

there’s a hurt little child
somewhere deep down
forever craving to be consoled
forever longing for love



AP: 1st place 2021

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Delice Arleen Skelly August 26, 2021 at 11:53 PM It's a sad thought but very true..Delice Line Gauthier August 27, 2021 at 3:24 PM Thanks, Delice ~ much appreciated

Mohamed Omar August 26, 2021 at 1:29 PM So true ,so beautifully put. Thanks Line Gauthier August 26, 2021 at 3:48 PM Thank you so much, Mohamed ~

L Milton Hankins August 26, 2021 at 8:22 AM Fine expression of the truth, Line. We all need more love to console that inner "little child." Line Gauthier August 26, 2021 at 3:48 PM Absolutely ~ thanks, Milton