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Deeds By Seeds

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Deeds By Seeds A package came by sea and land, delivered right into my hand, on it said, "From China With Love", I wondered what this be sort of, 'tis nothing but a bunch of seeds, plant them will I see where it leads, least they are not some kind of flask, bearing that caused us to wear masks, I know naught what I sow will reap, my bible says kind-heart will keep, so I will plant this mystery, knowing both lands our history, Chinese seeds I grant thee pardon, near my Japanese tea garden. 2020 August 17 *3rd Place* "Mystery Seeds" ~~Carolyn Devonshire: Judged 2020 August 18

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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/19/2020 11:39:00 AM
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- Congratulations so much on your winning poem, William :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/19/2020 12:44:00 PM
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Sincerest appreciation, Anne-Lise, stay well my friend, Aloha! William
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/18/2020 4:25:00 PM
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I enjoyed this a lot. Cute idea and I liked what you said beg my pardon,near the Japanese garden! Congrats for the win, William.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/18/2020 4:43:00 PM
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I am very grateful indeed, Andrea, stay well my friend, Aloha! William
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/18/2020 2:35:00 PM
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Indeed, I would have been concerned if I'd received a "flask" from China, William. Congratulations on your win in the contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/18/2020 2:41:00 PM
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Cheers, Carolyn, stay well my friend, Aloha! William
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/17/2020 10:57:00 AM
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Hello William Kekaula, I like this poem. Aloha! Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/18/2020 12:23:00 PM
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Hello William, Blessings William Aloha! Darlene.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/17/2020 11:09:00 AM
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Blessings, Darlene, stay well my friend, Aloha! William
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2020 10:31:00 AM
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Very nice
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/17/2020 11:06:00 AM
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Thank you, Kim, stay well my friend, Aloha! William

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