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Decrepitude

I love my rusty dusty car, the most entrusted car, by far; a sort of hey! Come out and play, both here at home and far away, a last hurrah, a real star, my mighty, flighty, motor car. I’ve had it now for quite a time, I bought it new and in its prime. It rumbles, crumbles, trundles on, through life’s eternal marathon. It is my friend, the best by far. Just me - and my old motor car. ~ For Suzanne's 'Synathroesmic Cat' Competition.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/15/2013 11:35:00 AM
Charles, CONGRATULATIONS IN THE Synathroesmic Cat Contest. Have yourself a nice day ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/14/2013 5:50:00 PM
Great winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 5/14/2013 9:23:00 AM
Congratulations on a fun evaluation of your car and no. 1 win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/14/2013 9:22:00 AM
You sound like my husband, only he has a rusty dusty truck !!! :) Congratulations!!
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Date: 5/14/2013 7:29:00 AM
Oh , so cute. We had the same idea I think...congrats to you. Bg
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Date: 5/14/2013 12:21:00 AM
Perfect, makes me miss my first car too. J
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Date: 5/13/2013 8:59:00 PM
Charles, Congratulations, in "The Synathroesmic Cat Contest." take care*LINDA
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Date: 5/13/2013 7:16:00 PM
Congratulations. Thank you for your wonderful poem in my Synothroesmic Cat Contest. Best wishes, SuZ
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Date: 4/16/2013 4:15:00 PM
I love your rusty dusty car too! Thanks for the snicker...
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Date: 4/16/2013 12:33:00 PM
I loved my first car but it was never a rust bucket, I loved it to much to let it be,, love this though xx
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