Decrepitude

I love my rusty dusty car, the most entrusted car, by far; a sort of hey! Come out and play, both here at home and far away, a last hurrah, a real star, my mighty, flighty, motor car. I’ve had it now for quite a time, I bought it new and in its prime. It rumbles, crumbles, trundles on, through life’s eternal marathon. It is my friend, the best by far. Just me - and my old motor car. ~ For Suzanne's 'Synathroesmic Cat' Competition.
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A  Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 11:35 AM
Charles, CONGRATULATIONS IN THE Synathroesmic Cat Contest. Have yourself a nice day ~SKAT~
Kendrick Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 5:50 PM
Great winning work..Congrats..Sara
Johnson Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 9:23 AM
Congratulations on a fun evaluation of your car and no. 1 win. Love, Joyce
Richards Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 9:22 AM
You sound like my husband, only he has a rusty dusty truck !!! :) Congratulations!!
Gorelick Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 7:29 AM
Oh , so cute. We had the same idea I think...congrats to you. Bg
Sister Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 12:21 AM
Perfect, makes me miss my first car too. J
A   Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 8:59 PM
Charles, Congratulations, in "The Synathroesmic Cat Contest." take care*LINDA
Delaney Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 7:16 PM
Congratulations. Thank you for your wonderful poem in my Synothroesmic Cat Contest. Best wishes, SuZ
Konos Avatar
April 16, 2013 at 4:15 PM
I love your rusty dusty car too! Thanks for the snicker...
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 16, 2013 at 12:33 PM
I loved my first car but it was never a rust bucket, I loved it to much to let it be,, love this though xx
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