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Decrepit roots still cling

The palace of love we built ~  
when our blood still flowed very warm in our veins,  
     is now a crumbled castle —  
its walls with peeled paints and decayed wood;  
     a jaded clock and faded photographs  
           hung with wry, decrepit smiles.

Now we both live as weary souls ~  
     on a ship abandoned on a dry dock.  
Many layers of darkness and shadows  
     have blackened our joy,  
since the flickering light from our unquenched fire 
    was blown out by the wind.

And so,  
     we are made to swim in an ocean  
           without fishes or turtles.  
Our gardens are littered with leaves and petals,  
     blown aimlessly about by southern winds.  
The love in our hearts is unthawed ~  
     stony, hard, and sturdy.

Yet,  
     decrepit is a weight our life has to carry —  
     the burden dragging back our feet.  
It comes whispering out of a roaring crowd  
     and makes our cries  
          like a raindrop in a storm.

That,  
     despite being aged and frail,  
we are also broken and battered by time ~  
     more or less, we are trees whose roots have died,  
     merely hanging on to life  
          with a long-stretched thread about to snap.








Contest: Decrepit Contest
Contest Judged:  June 10th, 2025 6:26:00 AM
Sponsor: Constance La France
Placement: Second
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Andresen Avatar
June 10, 2025 at 12:26 PM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, life's journey is lovely written Maclawrence :) - hugs
Famuyiwa Avatar
June 10, 2025 at 2:47 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I appreciate your comment.
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