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Deck Party

deck party card game cut short trumped by sweat bees written April 7, 2017

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/7/2018 3:17:00 PM

Glad to become familiar with your work. You have a treasure full of poems, like this one. Congrats!

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 2/8/2018 3:55:00 AM

Thank you, I appreciate your time and energy.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/28/2017 8:10:00 PM

Love it! Congrats!

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 4/29/2017 9:31:00 AM

Thanks, Kim, glad for the read and comment

Glen Schwartz

Date: 4/28/2017 4:27:00 AM

Congrats on your win !!

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 4/28/2017 10:46:00 AM

thank you, Glen. Have a fun day in poetry and other stuff.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 4/28/2017 3:23:00 AM

Hi Reason A. Poet Congratulations on you win. Short, bittersweet and succinct. I asked a famous painter once (in my then naivety) how long it took him to to a painting. 'A lifetime, was his answer'. I guess that holds for your poem too. Many wishes, Kai

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 4/28/2017 10:48:00 AM

thank you, Kai, appreciate your time and energy. It was just one of those moments that fit a contest.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/27/2017 8:49:00 PM

Well done, Reason, congratulations on your win ~*

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 4/28/2017 10:49:00 AM

Thank you, Eve, congratulations accepted and welcomed.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/10/2017 9:51:00 AM

Succinct, Reason:) well done:)

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 4/10/2017 5:06:00 PM

the reality of hornets got to my grandson and I today as we were enjoying the back yard swing and slides, until one, nosy insect decided we were in his territory. We moved to the garage and I put hornet spray on the grocery list.

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/8/2017 2:25:00 PM

The descriptive wording and the great imagery brought it all to life with stark reality. Emile.

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 4/9/2017 12:48:00 PM

thank you, Emile, appreciate the read and remark. Have a great day and load up on the Orkin Spray.