Decrepit

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change inevitable surprisingly sweet ~ obstinance a bitter retreat—Poet

solutions unfound archaic unchanged condemns~ d e c r e p i t fetid

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Jay Narain

Date: 6/9/2025 11:20:00 AM

Intelligent sneryu. Good one.

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/9/2025 5:50:00 PM

Ty, Jay! Such a nice review~

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/8/2025 7:06:00 PM

Wonderful haiku with fantastic layers of imagery, dear Anaya. Amazing how you can put in just a few syllables. A slight slip in the title. Good luck

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/8/2025 7:17:00 PM

Ty, for both the heads up and kind review, SP. Some folks don't bother to help, I not one of those, and I'm so grateful to have a poet freind who gives a damn. Have a nice evening ~ Xhugs :)

Paige Hind

Date: 6/8/2025 6:19:00 PM

Very wise, Anaya.

Paige Hind
Date: 6/8/2025 7:06:00 PM

Very stunning!

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/8/2025 6:26:00 PM

Ty very kindly. I was looking for decrepit trees to post and found this striking image and couldn't resist posting it ~ stunner isn't it!