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December Eve Gold

Bearing the weight of signs and kindly murk, no frock on hands, I glory in my work. O joy of first snow - I beam in the cold, starved for the feast of December Eve gold. Of dark dreary nights, balm to dwell inside. Not so, when the sky unveils a white bride. Twirling, grinning like a little girl, smiles fall from nimbostratus clouds a short while. Simplicity, from God’s trust, delivers, bright cheeriness and heavenly shivers. 12/1/2020
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Fowler Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 7:06 AM
I love the imagery in this Kim. It brings a smile to my face. :) Linda
Rodrigues Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 6:11 PM
Thank you, Linda! :)
Zahid Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 2:55 AM
Aha Imagery is love. Nicely penned
Rodrigues Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 5:02 AM
Thank you, Paghunda!
Watt Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 5:18 PM
Kim, I love your tribute to snow, with your signature clever imagery, and a great image of snowflakes ~ John
Rodrigues Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 5:02 AM
Thank you, John!
Dietrich Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 2:56 PM
what inventive personification and imagery. Cute poem, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 5:01 AM
Thank you, Andrea!
Mcintosh Avatar
December 1, 2020 at 3:28 PM
Your poem is beautiful and snow is beautiful, but I don't care for snow... I too grew up with it, but for years I've had to be on the roads a lot and don't like driving in it at all. Your smile flirts with the weather, though and I can see how much you enjoy this feeling snow brings with it. God bless you dear friend
Rodrigues Avatar
December 1, 2020 at 5:47 PM
Thank you for your revealing comment and warm support :) God bless!
Buhagiar Avatar
December 1, 2020 at 11:58 AM
Seems you relish the snow. I saw only sleet once. No snow but I expect it would be a sight. ~~
Rodrigues Avatar
December 1, 2020 at 1:35 PM
I do relish it! So rare here in Georgia. I grew up with snow.
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