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Bearing the weight of signs and kindly murk, no frock on hands, I glory in my work. O joy of first snow - I beam in the cold, starved for the feast of December Eve gold. Of dark dreary nights, balm to dwell inside. Not so, when the sky unveils a white bride. Twirling, grinning like a little girl, smiles fall from nimbostratus clouds a short while. Simplicity, from God’s trust, delivers, bright cheeriness and heavenly shivers. 12/1/2020

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Date: 12/3/2020 7:06:00 AM
I love the imagery in this Kim. It brings a smile to my face. :) Linda
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/3/2020 6:11:00 PM
Thank you, Linda! :)
Date: 12/3/2020 2:55:00 AM
Aha Imagery is love. Nicely penned
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/3/2020 5:02:00 AM
Thank you, Paghunda!
Date: 12/2/2020 5:18:00 PM
Kim, I love your tribute to snow, with your signature clever imagery, and a great image of snowflakes ~ John
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Date: 12/3/2020 5:02:00 AM
Thank you, John!
Date: 12/2/2020 2:56:00 PM
what inventive personification and imagery. Cute poem, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/3/2020 5:01:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 12/1/2020 3:28:00 PM
Your poem is beautiful and snow is beautiful, but I don't care for snow... I too grew up with it, but for years I've had to be on the roads a lot and don't like driving in it at all. Your smile flirts with the weather, though and I can see how much you enjoy this feeling snow brings with it. God bless you dear friend
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/1/2020 5:47:00 PM
Thank you for your revealing comment and warm support :) God bless!
Date: 12/1/2020 11:58:00 AM
Seems you relish the snow. I saw only sleet once. No snow but I expect it would be a sight. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/1/2020 1:35:00 PM
I do relish it! So rare here in Georgia. I grew up with snow.

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