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She didn't remember who I was But it didn't really matter Her eyes lit up like sunshine Each time I entered the room as if we were long lost friends She'd say, "Oh! Please, sit a spell",... and I would grab a chair... I would hand her the bag, and she would peek inside. She wore her smile like a happy child. Cookies !...."Oh my! My favorite kind!" One would think it were a pot of gold. As we chatted, she told me her about her birthday. "December 19th!", she would remind me.. Forgetting that just the day before we had celebrated, and even more. She said...."Oh,..let's have a party!" Everyone knew that this lady loved a party. And I replied, "Of course!" "I must be going!", she suddenly said Said again, with a worried brow...just as she fretted the day before.. "The girls will be home from school!" She looked around for her purse. "I have three girls, you know,.....they will be coming home from school." She repeated once more...."I have three daughters, you know." I told her the girls will be fine...and that I'd like to visit a little longer. That seemed to calm her. "Have you seen my ring?".. She held her blue veined, withered hand high in the air for me to see. A flash of glitter graced her finger, sparkling just like the stars in the sky. "My husband gave it to me. It was a Valentine surprise!" she said. "He was a rascal, you know!" "Oh,...it's beautiful, Irene"...I responded. "Did you know", she smiled again...."this was a Valentine surprise!"...? "My husband gave it to me" Finally, it was time for me to leave. I got up to say goodbye. "Would you mind giving me a ride?" she said. ...."The girls will be coming home from school!" I told her I would check on her girls...not to worry. And then I told her I would be back again tomorrow.. "I have a birthday coming", she said....December l9th!! Did you know?" Once more...I said..."Yes...we will have a party".... "Did you see my ring?"..."My husband gave it to me on Valentines, it was a surprise!" And I said..."It's lovely Irene....as lovely as the stars in the sky" As lovely as Irene.... Goodnight Irene goodnight....the stars will shine brighter tonight,... Stars always shine brighter in December........ Goodnight Irene, goodnight.... _________________________________________________________________________

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Date: 11/3/2015 12:49:00 PM
Thanks for telling us a little more about Irene . Congratulations on a nice win. Love,Joyce
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Date: 11/3/2015 1:11:00 AM
Congrats on ur superb win Carrie with this amazing write!
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Date: 11/2/2015 9:38:00 PM
Carrie, heart felt poem Congratulations on your sweet December Win. SKAT
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Date: 11/2/2015 3:38:00 PM
This brought tears to my eyes Carrie - mum's memory is getting worse but not at this level yet - such a touching poem congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 9/21/2009 7:46:00 AM
This awesome piece speaks volumes, Carrie. I love the tender way in which you have displayed such a sad part of life that touches so many. This is a testament to your beautiful heart. Love, Robin
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Date: 9/19/2009 12:56:00 AM
A tender tribute.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
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Date: 9/18/2009 6:53:00 PM
the author (you!) knows of compassion for the elderly...I believe in this wholeheartedly! and my Mom and I call this kind of visit a "Christmas Cup Of Tea!" after the book by the same name!...jim
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Date: 9/18/2009 6:06:00 PM
soup mail....:-)
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Date: 9/18/2009 5:21:00 PM
this is a heartfelt write . I enjoyed the read .... who is Irene? (just wondering) great work Carrie!
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Date: 9/18/2009 4:51:00 PM
Heartfelt piece Carrie, sounds like demtia...a sad case of a mentla illness...it's heartbreaking to hear them repeat themselves. May God help Irene cope with this illness...Raul
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Date: 9/18/2009 4:13:00 PM
this goes to my favs Carrie..sweet sad true story toucing my heart,so many lovely poems going on today,sweet Irene,in you she found her comfort and im sure she s there amongst the stars smiling at you,i need a tishoo Carrie,sweet write ,heartfelt indeed--December,i always loved December and already looking forward to it..This December Irene will be with her loved ones,and an angel on your xmas tree-well penned--Charma
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Date: 9/18/2009 4:06:00 PM
Nicely done tribute to a friend. Sad to see one go by losing memory then losing them to death. Keep writing. Sara
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