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DECAYING HOUSE Old lady living in old building. Doors with rusty latches, windowpane broken, cornice full of feral ferns. Decaying house at corner of blind lane. Showers percolate through porous porch. Old lady watches in frolic fun. She cleans pale torn carpet with much care. Cats play on unpaved yard under Sun. Sixty years back she planted sapling turning huge massive tree at front gate holds large boughs-branches- bunches of leaves. now nests of termites in rotten state. Old lady only waits for children, grandchildren to visit someday. She feels dynamism in each limb with lively mind: No senile decay. 09/27/20 Second Place 'Writing Challenge- Decay' Contest by Constance La France 'Completely on your Choice (29) Contest by Brian Strand

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Date: 10/2/2020 6:19:00 AM
- A great poem, Anisha :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 10/2/2020 9:31:00 AM
Thanks n Blessing
Date: 9/29/2020 9:42:00 PM
Well written, Anisha, age seems to slow down the body to move. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 10/2/2020 9:30:00 AM
Thanks n Regards
Date: 9/29/2020 1:53:00 PM
Anisha, congratulations on your win in my Decay Writing Challenge with this wonderful poem, great pic too _Constance
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 9/29/2020 9:39:00 PM
Thanks Constance for appreciation. Love.
Date: 9/29/2020 11:13:00 AM
Nicely written Anisha. Congratulations on the win!
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