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Decaying Friendships

Friendships that go bad Some even must decay I am still missing you I sit alone on the bay. Date Written 9/22/2020 How Many Syllables Writing Challenge - Decay - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France 3 Place Writing Challenge - Decay -Contest Judged:9/29/2020 Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/2/2020 6:27:00 AM

- A sad poem, Paula :( - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 9/29/2020 9:58:00 PM

Well written, Paula, it is a shame when friendship wilts away. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/30/2020 8:56:00 AM

Thanks, for your note and for your congratulations. You are so right when you say, "it is a shame when friendship wilts away." Guess that is part of life. So glad you like this write. It was an honor to have a win. Enjoy your day................

Sigrid Ermine

Date: 9/29/2020 5:53:00 PM

Lovely poem, Paula. Congratulations on your Win.!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/30/2020 8:53:00 AM

Thanks, for your note and for your congratulations. Sad but a fun write. So glad you like it. It was an honor to have a win. Enjoy your day............

Constance La France

Date: 9/29/2020 1:57:00 PM

Paula, congratulations on your win in my Decay Writing Challenge with this wonderful poem _Constance

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/30/2020 8:50:00 AM

Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have a win. Sad but fun to write. So glad you like this one. Have a wonderful day............

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/23/2020 8:27:00 PM

Too many do go bad. Much of the decay is eminently preventable, sadly. Rings true, Paula. Thanks, Gershon

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/24/2020 10:17:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Yes, so sad. Have a wonderful day.......

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/23/2020 6:24:00 PM

Those are so sad.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/24/2020 10:16:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Yes, sad. Have a great day.............