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Placed 1st in Constance LaFrance's Dark or Decayed Words Contest September 10, 2023

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Decayed

What causes a relationship to fail?
Decay sets in when thoughtlessness persists,      
when selfishness extends beyond the pale,
and chances to show love are blindly missed.         

Vacated houses crumbling with decay
once teemed with life and families with dreams.
Now in the wind, these spindly structures sway,
not willing to give up the ghost, it seems.

But Nature’s life-renewing power leans                
upon decay of plants. Like night and day,
these opposites, decay and growth, are means   
that lead to all Earth’s glory on display.
    

      Each year Spring plants and flowers grace the Earth,     
      for God decreed that death results in birth.
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Fowler Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 3:24 PM
Awesome write Janice. The last line is telling. Belated congratulations, I see! :)
Bowring Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 9:39 AM
This is a wonderful poetic poem Janice. Very well written. Great flow and such a well constructed sonnet. I love the lines, ‘these opposites, decay and growth, are means that lead to all Earth’s glory display’.I’m reading it out aloud and can hear Shakespeare in my ear! Brilliant! The ending couplet is magnificent as well. Very impressed. Loved it! Thank you for sharing :)
Canerdy Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 7:49 PM
Christina, your response to my poem has made my day! Thank you SO much. Janice
La France Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 10:53 PM
Janice, wonderful writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, Constance
Canerdy Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 7:27 AM
Constance, thanks a million for sponsoring and for my win. I am thrilled! Janice
Alex Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 8:55 PM
A great sonnet. Congratulations!
Canerdy Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 7:27 AM
Thanks so much, Christuraj. Janice
George Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 8:44 PM
Back to your poem, deep and profound with Congratulations on your first place win, dear Janice
Canerdy Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 7:26 AM
Thanks a million, Valsa! Janice
Poet Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 8:53 AM
Congratulations on your contest top win with this lovely poem, Janice
Canerdy Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 1:27 PM
Thanks a million, Lasaad. Janice
Daniel Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 11:37 PM
"Death results in birth", well said, Janice, great thoughtful sonnet:)
Canerdy Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 6:25 PM
Thanks so much, Joanna! Janice
George Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 9:32 PM
You have handled the topic in a highly philosophical way. Decay and growth contrasted in abstract human relationships and tangible structures! Lovely sonnet dear Janice. All the Best !
Canerdy Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 6:27 PM
Valsa, I SO appreciate this great response to my sonnet! Janice
Rodrigues Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 7:06 AM
Very true! Our world shows decay. I remember one house with a proverbial white picket fence, perfect pair of beds for their children but they moved in, things fell apart apropos of the relationship like the flood and dismantling of kitchen. The other way around was overgrowth then a lovely mossing like a fairytale as relationship got better. Two different stories.
Canerdy Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 6:29 PM
Kim, thank you so much for your response to my sonnet. Janice
Pandit Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 4:58 AM
Your ending line captures the essence of your poem for me, Janice. Renewal follows decay--nature's way of healing!
Canerdy Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 5:44 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay! Janice
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