Deathbed

A bed half eaten by termites

She lay on, like her ancestors

Before her, ripe of age

A leaf that had been dried

Between pages yellowed with age

Threatening to fall apart

At the slightest feel.

Her eyes no longer

Windows to her soul

The black holes they were

From which nothing escaped.

She breathed day and night

To the dismay of her children

Who stood by her bedside

Doing nothing but helplessly sigh

Even the tattered blanket 

Seemed to mock her

When pulled over her head

Let her scrawny feet peep out

The wait seemed endless

Making all wonder

Was it death refusing to claim her?

Or her refusing to quit?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Nair Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 12:45 AM
Very touching and down-to-earth. i could relate to it as i have an uncle in a similar state now..
Menon Avatar
July 4, 2011 at 9:29 PM
it is painful indeed. thanks for the visit and for the comment
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