Death Still Beckons

If vines erupted and conquered my name,
On weather-cracked-stone beneath sullen skies;
Where shrouded secrets sink smothered in shame,
Circled by vultures that pray passion dies;
Eager to feed on Rigamortised dreams,
Candlewax death-cicles frozen insane;
Recycled failures devolving from screams,
Heard ruptured eyes when I couldn’t say plain –
Although tomorrow seems life-times away,
After yesterday killed ours yet unseen,
I loved you then, would then, and do today,
Despite your silence which suffocates green;
 Then truly would I gasp bereft of breath,
  When still unforgiven beckons cruel death.

Written: 10/2/2016
Submittal for:  Overgrown with Vines
Sponsored by:  Broken Wings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/14/2016 3:02:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your winning work..Very unique and creative..Congrats on your placement in the winners' list..Sara
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Date: 10/10/2016 10:07:00 AM
Phillip, congratulations on your win in my contest with this great sonnet ~
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Date: 10/9/2016 11:25:00 AM
I love your sonnets Phillip- "when still unforgiven beckons cruel death"...wow powerful stuff here...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 10/8/2016 5:39:00 PM
Sadly wonderful write Phillip, congratulations....
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 10/8/2016 5:43:00 PM
Thank you Charlie - very much appreciated
Date: 10/5/2016 9:06:00 AM
This one is really dark and sad but very beautiful, Phillip:) I do hope it gets top honours:)
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Date: 10/3/2016 12:31:00 PM
Good take on the theme Phil. Nice use of alliteration and fresh imagery here in this sonnet.
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Date: 10/2/2016 11:33:00 AM
Oh Phillip this is so sadly beautiful... Love it...;)-luloo
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Date: 10/2/2016 11:13:00 AM
Pain seeps from every line Phillip. I can relate to someone who won't forgive. It is their lesson to learn, not yours. You need to forgive them for not forgiving. This is a wonderful offering for the contest and I hope it gets top honors. : ) 7
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 10/2/2016 11:20:00 AM
Thank you Connie - your words lifted my spirits that have become troubled by how freely these darker writes have been flowing from me of late - thank you sincerely :)
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