Death Row Execution Day

Why do I find myself at the gates of hell,

Have I been so evil,heartless,selfish,

People are bad,perhaps I was, who can tell,

Things happen,then those wronged feel anguish,

Obviously what I have done was not the right thing,

Hurting others, deceiving friends, cruel actions,

But being sent to hell for my actions have no bearing,

Just could not deal with situations, too many distractions,

Do not want to go there, do not want to go to hell,

Now wishing that I was not so bad, can I repent,

No way back now, my soul to the devil I did sell,

What have I done, this is the right place I have been sent,

There is no one to save my soul now, lust and desire,

I am about to enter the depths of hells fire.

21/02/2017.
Fear contest.
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Melugin Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 3:39 PM
Roy, Excellent!! You became your subject and lived his emotions throughout this stellar work! I applaud you! my best, chuck
Pett Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 4:08 PM
Thank you very much Chuck for your very kind comment, I only know about this subject from TV programs but must admit I do find it interesting, thanks again, Roy.
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 1:13 PM
- A powerful poem, Roy - (But, I believe it's just a nightmare ... soon you wake up :) - Great written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pett Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 2:24 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise I have a morbid interest about people on death row, why??? anyway thank you for your encouragement and support, Roy.
White Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 10:22 PM
So well expressed, those conflicting thoughts and emotions running through this person....
Pett Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 2:32 AM
Thank you very much Darren, it is difficult to imagine a persons thoughts of someone looking at their life being ended due to their own actions, thanks again, Roy.
Medders Tobechi Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 12:31 PM
It is never too late to ask for forgiveness. Intense emotional write. GL in the contest.
Pett Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 2:20 PM
Thank you very much Janis for reading and your very kind comment, Roy.
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