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A pretty bird sings sweetly upon a fence outside my window, Until a cat comes creeping and pulls a wing down; Sad little bird lay on the ground within sharp claws, trembling. Struggling to get free with no real hope of that happening, Her feeble attempts no match for a feral cat; Oh sadness, I know it is natural for that wild green eyed cat. Finished, the cat moves on- it was not hunger just a game, Close by a nest of baby birds is loudly tweeting; The pretty bird looks up to the blue sky with one last chirp. ____ I am sure she is dead yet I find myself rushing outside to her, A basket quickly grabbed, I pick her frail body up; And bring her inside- I notice that although in shock, NOT DEAD. And right away I go back outside to find that nest of babies, And now they are all quite alive in my sunroom; Oh, the chirping is loud, deafening, but it brings me happiness. What started out a poem of death became a poem of happiness - ____________________________________ May 6, 2016 Poetry/Verse/Death of Mother Bird Copyright Protected, ID 16-787-108-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Date: 5/10/2016 7:50:00 AM
Such a compassionate write, Constance!
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Date: 5/7/2016 3:20:00 AM
Great:) I like the positive tone:) glad the bird found you:)
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Date: 5/6/2016 5:08:00 PM
Nature is nature and with this write you display the heart of a compassionate, loving nature! The best to you in this contest BW! :-)
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Constance La France
Date: 5/6/2016 6:45:00 PM
Walter, thanks for visiting, oh yes, this is something I would do and did once...
Date: 5/6/2016 10:09:00 AM
no kip for you chirping birds mind will be worth it good twist and good luck
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Constance La France
Date: 5/6/2016 6:47:00 PM
Stephen thanks for visiting and commenting, appreciate

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