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Death of An Idea

death of an idea

some where sitting 
in my easy chair
to watch the news.
tsk tsk ’s rolling off my tongue 
traveling in the opposite direction
to my finely prepared coffee.


i am a phoney in all.
what is seen and heard, 
truly repulses me; it is inhuman 
or is it too human.
I cogitate munching a sweet biscuit.
a twinkling of an idea tries to be born
but its smashed with
a million reasons, “why not”

safe here keeping my sword 
in its stone. too old, deserve this rest. 
fought my battles
got the scars to prove it.
those scars are healed.
too frightened is the truth!

pacify with, not the only one 
wait until some one else speaks up
but is that all? 
just wait and swallow
the empathy choking  strangling life 
with a secretive smugness. 
speak out  
as we each, given the words to speak,
slide them under the poetic door, unseen.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/21/2017 8:22:00 AM
Heck of a place to resume my reading of your work! But, but, but... I'd rather be silly;-) I ignore the world (news) with head in sand, obliviously ostriched, inured to the flow. "Inhuman or too human?" Love that line! Oh, the baskets we weave, eh? Cheerduckens! ~ john
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Date: 8/18/2017 9:13:00 AM
Wow! And, yup.
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Date: 8/18/2017 4:12:00 AM
I love this! This is such a tremendous write my friend Patricia! I surely enjoyed reading this delightful poem this morning! It's true, if you get inspired, you should certainly write about it, don't keep it hidden! What a fascinating piece, Great Work!!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/18/2017 7:48:00 AM
Thank you very much.

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