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Death of a Loved One

Dedicated to my stepdad, who died of Alzheimer's over 15 years ago: There is no need to mourn, for now he goes to where no thunder quakes, no harsh wind blows. He’s going to the light where he will find the ones who wait, the ones who are enshrined within his heart, his kin of long agos. He leaves this earth and leaves the life he chose, proceeding to that tender light that glows in front of him, no more to be confined. There is no need to mourn. Contented was he, and he had no foes until there came the fiend that comes and shows itself, then slowly ravages the mind. But grace has come. Though we are left behind, it’s to his sweet revival now he goes. There is no need to mourn. April 2, 2023 For Unseeking Seeker's Death Of A Loved One Poetry Contest

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Date: 5/10/2023 3:03:00 PM
Such a beautiful well expressed poem. Thank you for sharing it Andrea
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Date: 4/6/2023 2:29:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Andrea :) - Happy Easter :) - hugs
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Date: 4/5/2023 9:41:00 PM
You have done full justice to the topic dear Andrea. In a way there is no need to mourn one's death as he/ she enters a state of bliss where 'no thunder quakes or harsh wind blows' ! Well done Andrea. All the Best!
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Date: 4/5/2023 1:03:00 PM
Good one in appreciation of your step-dad. Also, to let people know about Alzheimer's Disease. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 4/3/2023 1:57:00 AM
Nicely crafted, Andrea:)
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Date: 4/3/2023 1:52:00 AM
I agree with you. My wife died from heart block but her dementia was terrible.
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Date: 4/2/2023 7:31:00 PM
This is absolutely beautiful, Andrea. That condition is a fiend, indeed.
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Date: 4/2/2023 6:41:00 PM
WoW! Andrea, You penned a well-written a "not so easy" topic. I echo what Daniel said. Best wishes in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your evening:-)Alexis
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Date: 4/2/2023 3:46:00 PM
This is a very comforting poem, Andrea. Nicely penned, girl:)
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Date: 4/2/2023 11:42:00 AM
- "He's going to the light..." a lovely poem, Andrea - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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