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Death of a Hummer- Ct

O, I Remember
    You Broke my Heart
'In the Garden'
        My Tranquil Garden
At My Garden End

'O, Sweet Hummer'
        Falling, Falling, Falling
 " and angels wept"
     O, Why, Why, Why

Hollow, Hollow Inside
   O, my broken heart   
                  Death Is Cruel
O, the hurt
             In My Heart
    O, the pain    "I weep"

             She Lays In Repose

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July 2, 2019


Poetry/Light Verse/Death of a Hummer
Copyright Protected, ID 19-1163-708-02
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest, Collaboration of Your Titles
sponsor, Charles Messina

Second Place

Copyright © Constance La France | Year Posted 2019

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Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/15/2019 9:05:00 AM Great job Constance, congrats. Login to Reply

Charles Messina Date: 7/15/2019 3:26:00 AM Dear Heart, this poem touched me. Now that I see the picture of the humming bird it even touches me more. Funny, I just saw a humming bird this weekend while on vacation (It's the first time I ever saw one in real life) Great job collaborating your titles into this wonderful poem. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Charlie Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/4/2019 7:57:00 PM wow, you did an amazing job with your titles. I have so many I could use, I think that will make it even harder. haha!! Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 7/4/2019 7:29:00 PM A sad poem but well done DH.. Login to Reply

Caren Krutsinger Date: 7/4/2019 11:09:00 AM So sad is this poem and yet so gloriously written, my friend! Login to Reply

Lindsay Laurie Date: 7/3/2019 7:21:00 PM Hello Dear Heart … always sad when something that brings so much joy is gone. The feeling in your poem shows this - thank you Dear Heart - Lindsay Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 7/2/2019 6:41:00 PM beautiful with your trademark sadness Constance, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 7/2/2019 6:53:00 PM Jan, thanks for visiting, oh gosh it is sad !