Death of a Dear Lady

I often passed the time away
walking with you, Natalia,
down on the beach.
The sand, the sun, the surf,
perfection to you.
The breeze with its saliferous scent,
the sound of the swelling billows
as they hit the darkened rocks.
 
I often remember those walks.
How can I ever forget?
Your sparkling eyes,
that wan smile,
the resignation of life despite
the scar that ran down
one side of your cheek,
a remnant of a useless operation.
 
Ah Natalia, you always amazed me.
We have been friends, since our childhood days.
Always friends ready to help.
You never changed.
Your staunch attitude and patience,
your failing strength and knowledge
that you had no future to look forward to.
Yes, you amazed me that facing death
you even planned your own funeral.
 
Till one fine sunny day,
despite the lost battle,
a smile on your face
you peacefully passed away,
surrounded by 
your many brothers and sisters,
missed by all and especially
by me.  Rest in peace, dear Natalia,
rest in the peace you deserve.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Romios Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 1:48 AM
Belated Congratulations, Sorry for you loss.. Panagiota xx
Hamilton Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 9:18 AM
Congrats Victor this is a touching tribute to a great friend, my deepest condolences, and congrats on POTD, little consolation...considering...
Proxenos Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 11:07 AM
I believe that Natalie is your guardian angel and always looks out for you, she wants you to join her, but when its time. I am so happy that she passed away peacefully but my heart is saddened by your sadness. Love and blessings my dear friend. Congrats on POTD, richly deserved. Jennifer. Jennifer.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 8:46 AM
Congratulations on POTD win. A "Beautiful" write. I love your line, "How can I ever forget?" You can't. Special love is special. A peacefully passing away is a blessing and what we all want. Many you be blessed...................
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 1:22 PM
Congrats on a well deserved POTD!
Wolf Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 6:48 AM
Natalia's soul must surely feel the love up there in Heaven. A beautiful tribute, Victor, and richly deserved POTD yesterday. Peace and Serenity, Gershon
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 5:50 AM
Congratulations on POTD dear vb! mo hugs
Riabi Dziri Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 12:45 AM
I have just read the beauty of genuine Love and care between human souls.. we always learn to give share and care.. we mark each other with grace, generosity and humility.. weak or strong.. fearful or valiant.. we just accept one another for who we are.. So wonderful and heartfelt! A work of the beauty of gratitude and Love! Congratulations, Victor, on your POTD honour! Deserving of the recognition and acknowledgement! My deepest regards and blessings.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 5:54 AM
It always give me great pleasure to read your kind comments.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 7:01 PM
A fine tribute to the days you spent together with Natalia! A peaceful passing is what we all hope for. Very nice write, sweet friend!
Edmonds  Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 3:34 PM
A beautiful tribute to your friend Victor, so sorry for your loss. Congratulations on poem of the day. Belle
Michael Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 3:11 PM
Loving goodbye...Congratulations Victor Buhagiar on POTD...
Sands Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 2:33 PM
I pray for peace for Natalia. I am sorry to hear this news. Well written poem. Congratulations for POTD !
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 11:08 AM
Victor, your beautiful tribute to your friend expresses how profoundly she touched your life. Good friends are one of the greatest joys in life. I am sorry for your loss. Best wishes on your POTD honors. Blessings xxoo
Kauffman Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 10:54 AM
I believe such special friends are the treasures in our lives and they bring out the treasure hidden in us as evidenced by your beautiful tribute. Many years ago I lost such a friend. I still miss her. You have written a truly beautiful remembrance. Congratulations on your POTD, Victor. Sending you blessings of consolation.
Nicole Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 9:30 AM
Natalia will always be with you. Those moments shared, the memories made. They linger deep with your heart. I am so sorry for your loss. This is beautiful and moving, all at the same time. Congratulations Victor, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Roper Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 9:26 AM
back with congratulations on POTD. Hugs eve
Downing  Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 9:10 AM
Truly beautiful tribute, Vic, and congratulations on POTD
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 8:49 AM
Such a moving devotional tribute to your better half, Victor! It brings this smitten reader's eyes to tears. Kudos on POTD. A well-deserved honor of heartfelt remembrance. Prayers of love goes to you, spoken w/quiet joy.
Watt Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 8:26 AM
Victor, this is a beautiful tribute to your lovely friend who overcame so much. I'm sure she felt lucky to have had you as a friend as well. She lives on in your memory and your wonderful poetry. Congratulations for the POTD honor today. ~ John
Andresen Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 8:14 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 7:46 AM
Victor, congratulations on receiving POTD with this emotional and beautifully penned poem, a FAV for me _Constance
Logan Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 6:53 AM
Losing a life long friend is truly heartbreaking. Congratulations on potd with your honor of Natalia.
Allison Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 5:32 AM
Such a touching tribute Victor, many congratulations on your potd:-) Hugs Jan xx
Fowler Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 5:31 AM
Back to say congrats for POTD Victor. :) Linda
Williams Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 5:20 AM
A beautiful tribute to your childhood friend Victor and worthy of the POTD. Congratulations and may Natalia, I'm convinced that she will - happily be resting in peace especially after her earthly traumas. Maria
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