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Death Invasion

Slow death invasion Slick, black, silent, riding waves Man again breaks faith

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Jack Horne

Date: 9/6/2013 2:45:00 PM

powerful write indeed, Annalise

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/15/2010 3:09:00 PM

Yes, man breaks the faith again and again. We have now learned that BP has lied about the amount of oil that continues to pour out into the Gulf. They say it is already more than was spilled in the Exxon Valdez incident and it hasn't stopped yet. Your poem truly describes this frightening situation so well, Audrey. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/15/2010 2:19:00 PM

Did u removed your collaboration poem? I know I read it last night... I posted a blog late last night explaining my upcoming schedule... luv.. BBF .. "Sweetheart"

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/15/2010 12:11:00 PM

Great work Audrey. .Charma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/13/2010 7:36:00 PM

Yes how true ..your lines hit home right into the soul.. the core of the matter.. good luck in the new contest .. your title is awesome .. thankxx for your sweet comments today.. luv.. from the "Sweetheart"

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/13/2010 6:31:00 PM

Wow....you've done a wonderful piece with so few words, Audrey! Well done!!! And an added note...thank you so much for your sweet comments on my poems...it means so much to hear your nice compliment! Thank you! ~ Love, Carrie

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/13/2010 6:12:00 PM

Yes this is a chilling picture. They are not anywhere near controlling it. Thank you for your comments on my Jack Benny poem. Love, Joyce

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2010 6:06:00 PM

well done on the haiku, Audrey, deep with the words. Is this for the contest, if so good luck,..p.d.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/13/2010 5:11:00 PM

This is heartbreaking mishap that is an eye opener of what can happen when manmade equipment fails..I hope that it will be a lesson for the future so that this will not be repeated..Great write for the picture...Good luck in the contest...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Amy Green

Date: 5/13/2010 4:30:00 PM

Really good one, Audrey.

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 5/13/2010 3:15:00 PM

Good luck in the contest, PB...Love, Jimmy

Tobey Hill

Date: 5/13/2010 9:48:00 AM

well done...TAH