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Robert J. Lindley, 12-02-2018
Sonnet(s)- Part Two

Note: Tale of  Life, Fate And  Death , written in four sonnets
Part Two, Double sonnets- Will faith hold power or temptation of having longer life rule. 

Death First Knocks, Fear Then Enters, Plea Given Double Sonnets, Part Two

(Double sonnets- Part Two)

Death First Knocks, Fear Then Enters, Plea Given 
Double sonnets,  Part Two

Death thy bladed hand, I gladly let pierce
That my end be grand, and my faith be fierce
Hollow words you spoke, what good few days more
For tho' life is brief, beyond lies joy's shore.
Thy guile cunning dark, thy cleverness deep
In life made my mark, thy price far too steep
My faith my haven, thy path a dark room
Raven was feared, that was Poe's great doom.
I bid you welcome, Fate has wrote that hour
Fear not sad outcome, death holds no power
Please set thy fangs deep, man's end but a sleep
Faith's vows I will keep, dying- no tears weep.

~ May blessings gift leaving in sweetest dreams. ~
~ Gone the vagaries and sad human schemes. ~

Death may be - black darkness, seas a-churnin'
Amidst soil rot and high flames a-burnin'
Or other realms, welcoming our returning
Or fantasy of more, our deep yearning.
Shall my loss, grieve greatly those I cherish
As this mortal coil is doomed to perish
I pray, this Fate, that of human demise
Is but change to our soul thereby revise.
A slow sink in seas of imagination
A sad parting from our close relations
Or perhaps, just a step into the Light
Needed sleep away from dread, dark of night.

~ May blessings gift leaving in sweetest dreams. ~
~ Gone the vagaries and sad human schemes. ~

Robert J. Lindley, 12-02-2018
Sonnet(s)- Part Two

Note: Tale of  Life, Fate And  Death , written in four sonnets
Part Two, Double sonnets- Will faith hold power or temptation of having longer life rule. Continued from Part One,  previously presented here(double sonnets).
A total of four connecting sonnets..

Second Note- I have decided to not change my usual way of presenting my poetry.  I will continue as I have from the start adding notes and dates and presenting as I think best. Sharing more information to the readers, seems to me to be a net positive and in no way a negative.
That so many great poets here expressed that wisdom, in my blog convinced me .
And reveals how many great and truly dedicated poets/artists we have at this fine poetry site.
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Sharp Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 11:15 PM
An excellent follow-on from part one, Robert, dramatic and powerful as ever. Your pen has not lost any of of its dynamism, and your notes, as always, are integral to the piece as a whole.
Lindley Avatar
December 3, 2018 at 8:06 AM
Lawrence my great friend, and writing partner- I am truly delighted that you've read both parts to this 4 sonnet creation and have found them dramatic, powerful and dynamic.. Your support and friendship has been a great gift to this old and tired poet.
Lindley Avatar
December 3, 2018 at 8:06 AM
reply continued- Your composing with me is truly an exceptional kindness and so revealing of your true character and your immense poetic talents as well. I thank you dear friend for all.
Ashley Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 10:27 PM
Wow! My dear friend, you have penned a powerful deeply emotional masterpiece. Your soulful artistry shines with intensity in the beautifully cut facets of this brilliant poetic gem. Gorgeous poetry and a fav! Warmest wishes my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
Lindley Avatar
December 3, 2018 at 7:59 AM
Susan my dear friend. Always a great pleasure to read your comments, and your exceptional poetry. I so appreciate that you collaborate with me and are a friend and very insightful poetic adviser too. Thanks for the fav and for the always sincere and immense kindness that you've shown me. God bless...
Kiser Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 9:07 PM
You describe death well with these sonnets, though it is also life. The transition we face has its challenges; I have no doubt you are going to meet them like a wise hero. Blessings to you and courage. Perhaps we will see even more of your word-paintings; after all, you do, do your job well.
Lindley Avatar
December 3, 2018 at 7:52 AM
My dear friend , thank you for your comments, immense kindness and always sage advice. I am truly humbled by your words my friend.
Cunningham Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 1:29 PM
Well written Robert, happy to see Your notes accompanying your verse. Tom.
Lindley Avatar
December 3, 2018 at 7:51 AM
Tom my great friend. Thank you for your support and your comments. Your kindness and your poetry reveal a gentle soul, deep thinker and that of a true art
La France Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 12:42 PM
Robert, first what great sonnets, beautifully penned, well done and second, so happy that you are keeping your notes that accompany your work, that gives my heart wings. Bully/Bullies BEWARE for Robert has an army of true poets behind him ~
Lindley Avatar
December 3, 2018 at 7:49 AM
My dear friend, I am so pleased that you liked this offering. Your support and that of the many other fine poets that commented on my blog was for me a Godsend. As I had no clue that my additional information added to my poems(notes,dates) were that well liked and truly supported by other poets here.
Duet Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 11:44 AM
Blessings of Light and Love coming your way .... the heart of a poet is your gift to us all. You have made your mark. It was your destiny to bless and be blessed.
Lindley Avatar
December 3, 2018 at 7:46 AM
My dear friend, your kindness and gifting of wishing Light and Love blessings my way clearly reveals the goodness, gentle spirit and faith you yourself must have in abundance. I thank you and so appreciate that very much.
Wanter Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 10:53 AM
Remarkable, just remarkable!!!! And I am pleased that you didn't give in to the naysayers.
Lindley Avatar
December 3, 2018 at 7:42 AM
Thank you my dear friend. My decision to even go the path of stopping was based upon that possibly the accusation had some truth in it. Then the responses made in my blog by great poet that I respect, all refuted that.
Michael Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 10:14 AM
A wonderful write...with style and grace of a poet...you appear in this write...All the best
Lindley Avatar
December 3, 2018 at 7:40 AM
Arturo, thank you for reading and commenting. That much of my soul and faith appears in this poem you correctly noted. All the best to you my dear friend, always..
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