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Grant me to hold my freedom from ancestry. Nothing fails to satisfy longings but death. These pinions gave me sway and authority. To portray my consideration via the breadth. Nothing fails to satisfy longings but death. These wings included their appearance. To describe my thoughts via the breadth. Strange dreams I express in my concupiscence. These wings included their appearance. These wings have hauled me asunder in my life. Strange dreams I express in my concupiscence. In every imaginable way of success or strife. These wings have hauled me asunder in my life. The wings that boosted my trust and faith. In every imaginable way of success or strife. My joy is obscured in freedom's strength. The wings that boosted my trust and faith. These pinions gave me sway and authority. My joy is obscured in freedom's strength. Allow me to hold my freedom from ancestry.
Written: May 15, 2022

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Date: 5/16/2022 5:09:00 PM
A fine Pantoum, Lasaad, I enjoyed the read and thoughts on it. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 5/16/2022 5:16:00 AM
An outstanding pantoum with pr0fount verses, my dearest friend, Lasaad. I liked it. Blessings.
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Date: 5/16/2022 4:20:00 AM
You traverse a dark territory here my friend. Forlorn sound to your verses, Lasaad.
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Date: 5/16/2022 1:54:00 AM
"Nothing fails to satisfy longings but death". ..... So very true, dear friend. Masterfully crafted ! Pantoum is a difficult form. Yet in your hands, it becomes so facile.
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Date: 5/16/2022 12:59:00 AM
Many fail to write a pantoum. You did expertly.
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Date: 5/16/2022 12:53:00 AM
Such beauty! In the poem and the picture also!
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