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Death Defined-

Death Not final Given twice Physical part Also spiritual rising or falling You cease to move in the flesh As spirit moves onto heaven or hell By fragrant memes it's either lavender Or fire and brimstone fragranted schemes Life conquers all placement depends on you 2/19/22 For E Forms- Etheree- Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 2/20/2022 6:28:00 AM
So very, very true! Get right, get right, get right with God is what my mom used to sing... Loved the ending!
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James Edward Lee Sr.
Date: 2/20/2022 7:33:00 AM
Write On! Valerie, Always remember-" there is praise in words and words in praise" death is not finite leave his life are pure existence goes on for eternity it depends on our choices and our unforgiveness or forgiveness will we spend that life...thanks for your review... Again Write On James

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