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Death

Death seems like drowning in an ocean. Your breaths are the cause of your pain and misery. Once they leave you... You're floating. Floating in peace. It's refreshing, the water , the waves , the breeze, the fishes. Everything around you is soothing , Nothing to worry about , You get stuck in a veilof emptiness, Where there is on one but YOU... Life is just a test of your loyalty, faith , relationship, patience and your will to fight back all the odds... When you die , The test is over , The war is over.... You are free.

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Date: 4/25/2023 7:04:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts on death through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 4/23/2023 2:10:00 PM
Yes, the test will be over, we will soar free, and then we meet our Creator, Who laid down His life for us. I enjoyed reading your work. Sara
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