Dear Suicide

Dear Suicide

If you were standing with me,
as in a person or a thing.
I’d beat you, 
and I don’t just mean to win.
I’d beat you till you begged me, 
and then I’d beat you more.
Until your bones broke through your skin, 
and all of you was torn.
You sneak in through their darkness, 
you grow within their pain
And then you just move on, 
as if this were a game.

If you were standing with me, 
you wouldn’t be for long
You could try to scream for help
But there’d be none to hear your song.
I’d hold you under water, 
it wouldn’t be a chore.
You’d know that you are drowning, 
I’d let you watch the shore.
I’d shine light on your deception
I’d introduce you to your pain 
I’d rip out your lying tongue
So that you’d never speak again


If you were standing with me
I’d remind you of the time
You whispered in my ear before
And spun me a little rhyme.
I opened up your doorway 
and took a step inside.
But a light rushed swiftly past me
and torched through your dark lies.
See the truth is you are nothing
Your less now that you can’t talk
You aren’t even real
You’re a shadow when I walk.

If you were standing with me
I’d eventually let you go.
Let’s see you spin Your web of lies 
With me close by in tow
I’d hunt you for eternity 
with the whole world on my back.
 When you slip or stumble
Or your course at all does change
I’d put my sights onto your head
And send a round down range
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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February 15, 2020 at 6:41 AM
another poem i can relate to, i wrote one similar today... you write very well.. suicide is never the answer, but i understand people just want the pain to end.. welcome to soup..
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February 15, 2020 at 6:44 AM
Thanks, this one was written after my cousin passed a few months ago, her father took his own life about 5 years earlier.
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