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Dear Spring

Oh, bring me gentle wildflowers that blow,
   and the green hues of a forest in solitude;
   and all those sweet violets, purple hued.
Melt the thick ice so winding streams can flow,
and fill the trees with bird songs that echo.
   Oh, change the winter shadows with spring renewed,
   with leaves that unfurl and uncurl in quietude.
Let your rich embroidery spread and grow.

Dear Spring, will you pour your dappled sunlight,
   in swaying meadows where brown swallows float on wing;
and a thousand chirpings mingle in flight,
   where butterflies and hummingbirds on flowers cling;
then, let me lay in lush grass in delight.
Oh for this-   Dear Spring, I have been yearning.

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March 2, 2018

Poetry/Rhyme/Dear Sring
Copyright Protected, ID 18-10005-97-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written Under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest, Spring Is In The Air
sponsor, Emile Pinet

Third Place

Rhyming Pattern- ABBAABBA CDCDCD
Rhyming Verified on www.Rhymer.com

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 3/7/2018 1:31:00 PM
Lovely, Constance. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/6/2018 6:06:00 PM
Lovely energy and rhythm. A beauty. Congrats on your well deserved win, BW.
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Date: 3/6/2018 3:18:00 PM
Oh this is so lovely! Congratulations on your win :) xomo <3
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Date: 3/5/2018 12:20:00 PM
I love it that you are "one with nature"....in your conversation with Spring! Lovely as always !! Congrats to you Constance!!
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Date: 3/5/2018 11:20:00 AM
Congratulations BW it placed in the contest :) Wonderful!
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Date: 3/5/2018 11:19:00 AM
Congratulations, your poem earned a place in my contest, it was a very tough contest to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 3/3/2018 4:57:00 PM
Although your wings are broken, but you flew beautifully with your butterflies and hummingbirds in a spring garden and I was there with you... Thanks.
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Date: 3/3/2018 10:59:00 AM
Perfect beautiful picture of Spring. "He maketh me to lie down in green pastures...He restoreth my soul."
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Date: 3/2/2018 1:26:00 PM
This is so nice BW. I love it :) Good luck in the contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/3/2018 9:15:00 AM
Heidi, thank you for the comment, I worked on this for 2 days so I hope it places too ~
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