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Dear Santa, I Want

Dear Santa I want something I didn't want before. Let me explain. I got a gift from you last year, but I feel you made a mistake somehow. Not to complain, but Santa, though I’ve got no hamster, you gave me the wheel for a hamster to be running on, and you gave me too the cage for one! Were you just trying to tease? You didn’t mix me up with someone else, did you? This year I guess I’ll simply ask for a real live hamster, please! XXOO Written Dec. 11, 2017 for Kevin Shaw's Dear Santa, I want... Contest

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Line Gauthier

Date: 4/10/2018 6:59:00 PM

Confusion hovers... poor confused child. LOL Very cure, Andrea.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/27/2017 8:35:00 AM

What a cute poem Andrea:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/18/2017 9:33:00 PM

A sweet letter to Santa that sounds like what a child would write Santa! There are so many contests to join. I don't have time to join many. Hope you are enjoying the season with your students Carissa is enjoying Christmas everything! ; )

Johnny Martinez

Date: 12/16/2017 9:55:00 AM

Maybe if your really good he get you one. Nicely done.

Robert Warlov

Date: 12/15/2017 1:56:00 PM

my Santa suffers from nominal aphasia too. Forget letters. Send audio recordings.

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/15/2017 10:58:00 AM

Lol! Maybe the cage opened some how. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Joseph May

Date: 12/15/2017 9:24:00 AM

lol..lovely write Andrea

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/14/2017 10:04:00 PM

Soooo cute, Andrea! Janice

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/13/2017 9:24:00 PM

Wow, how did you come up with this idea. So original and definitely a fav. Me I would of donated the paraphernalia and asked for a huge gold bar. Not as sweet as yours but more profitable. So much love for you always, armand. Just to repeat myself a fav.

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/13/2017 5:09:00 PM

love this Andrea.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/13/2017 11:55:00 AM

Somewhere there's a hamster without a wheel, oh my. Good luck with this - it is out there for your wheelhouse (pun), what a spin (again!) you spun. Love ya ... CayCay

Silent One

Date: 12/13/2017 8:59:00 AM

I hope all your wishes come true... Sweet poem..

James Horn

Date: 12/13/2017 8:13:00 AM

After I had to hunt and hunt, Here I think is what I want And in a dream it did occur, What I want is a hamster. Me and my mind did engage; How about s hamster a cage; After that finally had agreed; Himself must learn how to feed.