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Dear Me…                             Today my thoughts are about you, only you!                                                                     Many years have passed … many hustling days,                                             many dreamlike nights,                            You didn’t have time to ponder about yourself!                                   Now all of a sudden the day has come…                           crimson-hued sunlight, peeping through the window                                             at dawn fell on your face,                                You glanced at yourself, and wondered....                                                Is this the real me?                             Is this the little girl from a humming city, who                                   Fell in love with a tranquil village, and                            walked to school barefooted...because she wanted                             to be with kids who were less fortunate than her!                                     Is this the girl who wanted to write                               about the struggles of life she saw around her,                                and her proud dad read classics to encourage,                                            in his very little spare time! Hello you…have you accomplished the goals                             you spent many sleepless nights imagining?                              Have you checked off a few in your bucket list?                                      publishing books? Have you, any?                                     with all the poems you scribbled                                       in the wee hours of the morning?                                 What happened to the memoir you started..                                         reminiscing the stories of your                                          family’s turbulent experiences                                         after partition of the homeland! You loved writing letters - do you still?       real, handwritten ...I mean - not emails!                               Here is this cabinet - showcasing your artwork!                           Oh, there are some paintings as well on the wall -                                       how did you manage to find time                       in between bustling schedules of a teacher and a mother? Do you still enjoy watching cooking shows of                                     Michael Smith, and Laura Calder!                                          And rush to try out those                        finger-licking recipes! even share with your colleague                                                  the next day!             Aha! I remember your succulent French cuisine Mmmm, absolument délicieux ! You can definitely brag about the three kids you raised -                                     I believe you,  it was not easy!                             It was wonderful to have a chat, Dear Friend…             You have lived life to your best - dreamed, sang, danced, loved.... what more can we wish for?                               Love and Take care, until we meet again. September 19, 2021 Inspired by "Letter To Your Future Self" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Silent One A Brian Strand 1097 Poetry Contest FIRST PLACE

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Date: 3/27/2022 10:29:00 PM
"You have lived life to your best - dreamed, sang, danced, loved.... what more can we wish for?" - A beautiful letter to the self portraying plenty of memories and truths. Congratulations!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/28/2022 5:32:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj. Yes, this is very personal - all about memories.
Date: 10/17/2021 12:51:00 PM
A deeply personal take on a letter to your future self.. so heartfelt and full of kind wishes... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/17/2021 1:18:00 PM
Thank you so much, Dear Poet and Dear Sponsor, for the lovely placement. This is a letter - for me, letters are personal. I enjoyed writing it. Warmest wishes ~ Mala
Date: 10/17/2021 9:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful "Dear Me" story/write. Love your line "It was wonderful to have a chat, Dear Friend…" We need to talk to self from time to time. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 9/21/2021 11:27:00 AM
Ah, you aced this poem Mala, its sounds like a life well lived and finely introspected existence, full of gratitude. Gl in the contest, you already won my heart with it.
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Date: 9/21/2021 7:37:00 AM
Love this, Mala, Takes one back to the real world, one of respect for all. love how it takes time, to recreate the theme, of thanks that being here on earth is a privilege. Also a poem, that say something of yourself, a poem, that assure the reader, there is so much good in humanity, upon the earth.
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Date: 9/21/2021 12:19:00 AM
What a splendid letter to your dearest self...Unique and inspiring....The best letter I read so far. Best wishes for the win!
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Date: 9/20/2021 9:21:00 AM
Forgot to mention am faving this Mala... for me to read later too... And I love your artwork... You are VERY talented... Keep inspiring us my friend... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 9/20/2021 7:07:00 AM
Oh wow... Such a lovely letter to your own self... genuine... revealing your true beautiful soul my sweet dear friend... I loved the cooking part... If those finger-licking recipes are vegetarian, let ME know too...Mala... Best wishes and hugs... ~ Ani
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