Kim Hilliker Poet Rhyme

Dear Lord

Dear Lord, I know you’re up there watching over
Your every daughter and every son
And through all the world’s changes, you continue
To care for each and every one

So, the times I’m feeling deserted and a little insecure
Please forgive me though my faith diminishes and
Of your love, I’m just not sure

And the times I’m feeling down and an atheist I act
Please understand it’s faith in myself that I lack

And when the doors that you keep open, I adamantly close
Please, don’t give up on me; for, that’s when
I need you the most.

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Audrey Haick February 1, 2010 at 10:34 PM Dear Kimberly, congratulations on your wonderful poem winning 2nd Place in the contest! And thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Peace and love, Audrey

Margaret Foster February 1, 2010 at 5:03 PM Congratulations Kimberley. A lovely sincere prayer.....Margaret

February 1, 2010 at 12:25 PM This prayer/poem feels so honest. Congratulations on your second place finish in the Faith contest. Enjoy you honor. Keep your faith shining. Karen

Joyce Johnson February 1, 2010 at 10:51 AM Thank you Kimberly for your comments on my win and congratulations on yours. This is a lovely faith filled prayer and I would have been proud to have written it. Love, Joyce

Connie Marcum Wong February 1, 2010 at 9:08 AM This is a very beautiful and meaningful poem Kimberly. Congratulations on winning second place. Blessings, Connie

Robert A. Dufresne February 1, 2010 at 2:50 AM Excellent poem prayer, Kimberly. My sentiments as well. Congratulations on your win. Robert

Constance La France February 1, 2010 at 2:10 AM Congratulations on a second place win, in my contest Faith, with this beautiful poem.

Abraham L November 1, 2009 at 8:46 AM i am not hear to condemn or judge each to his own, i can only encourage you and tell you no matter who you are or what you have done, God made a promise that he will never leave nor forsake us. He prove that when he gave his only son for you and me. He feels far away at times, but he's not. he may not come when we want him but he is always there. i love reading your poems, they are very encouraging, and something you want to read more and more.

Donielle Smith October 20, 2009 at 8:31 AM Hi, that was a very uplifting poem and I really enjoyed reading it. My friend God never gives up on us, sometimes we give up on Him. Keep God's gift of amazing words flowing from your heart. Much success!! Donielle S.

John Freeman September 30, 2009 at 6:57 PM Awesome lady, that the spirit, we all have times when we feel we are lost from God's love, but that's just so you will seek God more, as he wants us to. THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENT TODAY, ALWAYS WELCOME AND APPRECIATED, Sincerely Moses

James Fraser September 28, 2009 at 11:41 AM Heavenly piece Kimberly, beautifully written >> James