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Dear God, I Love You So

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My GOD, YOU are my life my existence revolves around YOU being my breath’s source the verity-cause of my heart beat… Here am I humbly exalting YOU with love’s propelling might: declaring, “Dear GOD, I love YOU so”. As my life YOU are my survival’s Bread granting contentment bliss beyond sufficiency’s exuberance… Hear my spirit of fervent devotion YOU deserve: whispering, “Dear GOD, I love YOU so”. My life bearing my soul’s Light of illumining truth radiance YOU shield me from grievous engulfment of ignorance-obscurity… I come to YOU with divine affection, moved by YOUR sublime love: affirming, “Dear GOD, I love YOU so”. Life of my essence YOU are the great Saviour author of my redemption eternal freeing me from hell’s wrath forever… To YOU do I yield my loving esteem that can’t commensurate YOUR sacrifice: proclaiming, “Dear GOD, I love YOU so.” Enabling my life YOU are the good Shepherd offering to me YOUR grace packed with pardon toward gratitude… Indeed, loving YOU along faith that pleases YOU is my best response: asserting, “Dear GOD, I love YOU so”. With YOU, my life fulfillment wraps me around YOUR compassion wholeness… Since YOU first loved me… I’m privileged to love and serve YOU, my LORD GOD, my LIFE:* testifying, “Dear GOD, I love YOU so”.
*John 14:6 Jesus saith unto him, I am the way, the truth, and the life: no man cometh unto the Father, but by me. Galatians 2:20 I am crucified with Christ: nevertheless I live; yet not I, but Christ liveth in me: and the life which I now live in the flesh I live by the faith of the Son of God, who loved me, and gave himself for me. August 1, 2020 2nd place, "Pick-A-Title, Vol 20 - Free Verse 3" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh; judged on 8/4/2020. Title was changed after poem was judged.

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Date: 8/5/2020 7:10:00 AM
Your lines indicates the strength of your faith. Beautifully expressed in your winning poem. Congratulations, Beata.
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Date: 8/4/2020 12:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest with this great poem, Beata:-) I loved it!
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Date: 8/4/2020 12:30:00 PM
A soothing one from your pen Beata. Lovely. Congratulations on your win :)
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