Dear Heart

Until I see her again, my heart remains broken There’s a special Angel up in Heaven who I miss with each beat of my heart. I suppose her purpose on earth was limited, for God took her too soon from me, and everyone else who loved her. She was my everything in life, my dear heart of heart. that God had blessed me with. She filled my heart with love, and spread electrifying joy throughout my being. Life was beautiful! It was a wonderful experience to be had. But she was taken unexpectedly too soon. Like my heart was ripped out of me. And now, I feel empty and hollow. A broken soul without its shell. No, I’m not mad at God. Yes, I know Heaven is pure and love. But still I break down countless times for I am a broken-hearted mother, endlessly grieving. I miss her day in and day out. She was my pride and joy, and I never even got a chance to say goodbye. People always say, time will heal, and you’ll see her one day. So I keep on searching for her. Waiting for a sign. Staring up in the sky for a glimpse of her. I sleeplessly await for her at night to appear and tell me, everything is alright, mom. I’m fine. Until I see her, my heart remains broken… I miss her! Fin Chuuk 1/28/23

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 7/20/2023 1:20:00 AM

The parting of a loved one is the hardest thing to come to terms with. Your poem is wonderful dear Fin. I miss you

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/13/2023 8:05:00 PM

So sorry to read this Fin, my heart goes out to you with deepest sympathy… Belle

Fin Chuuk
Date: 3/14/2023 6:19:00 AM

Belle, your comment means a lot to me. Thank you so much.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/18/2023 8:13:00 AM

This twisted my heart up and ripped it into pieces, writing poetry is therapeutic for many of us. I hope and pray it will help you heal too.

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/18/2023 8:44:00 PM

That is for sure. It has help helped me tremendously. Thank you, Caren :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/16/2023 6:25:00 PM

This is a really soulful poem, Fin, you will see her one day, plod on with that hope...

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/17/2023 8:53:00 PM

Thank you, Jo :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/15/2023 6:19:00 PM

Hugs…my Dad feels like that with my mom. Death is so hard.

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/17/2023 8:52:00 PM

Thank you Kim :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/13/2023 2:41:00 PM

you write with so much honest and passion, I am sure she is angeling over you right now as we speak !

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/17/2023 8:52:00 PM

Thank you, Mystic :)

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 2/7/2023 10:25:00 PM

Painful and sorrowful and yet we must recognise that our souls are eternal. Body dies but soul lives on. As such, we are always connected vibrationally in the ethereal domain of God’s love and light.

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/8/2023 4:07:00 PM

Indeed we must! Thank you, Seeker :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 2/7/2023 5:23:00 PM

Dear Fin, my eyes are misted with tears. I am genuinely and deeply moved by the outpouring of your grieving heart upon the poetic page. Your sorrow so palpable, your emotions so pure, so full of motherly love, that I'm sure the page must have wept as it absorbed your unimaginable heartbreak. So tenderly, longingly and lovingly written for your beloved daughter. I'm so sorry for your incredible loss, my friend, please accept my heartfelt condolences. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/8/2023 4:07:00 PM

Hello Susan, thank you so much for this sweetest comment. It means so much to me. :) ~ Fin

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/7/2023 6:46:00 AM

Sounds like my dad, with the loss of my mom. Heartbreak indeed <3

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/7/2023 4:23:00 PM

It’s never easy :(

Valsa George

Date: 2/6/2023 8:51:00 PM

Very very touching. I can gauge the depth of your sorrow... the sorrow of a mother who has lost the apple of her eye ! May God heal your broken heart ! Thanks a lot Fin for your kind visit to my page. Welcome to Poetry Soup, dear friend!

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/6/2023 8:59:00 PM

Balsa, thank you so much for this heartwarming comment and welcoming. I appreciate it.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 2/5/2023 12:20:00 PM

So touching Fin! Her love shows in your poetry. Panagiota xo

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/6/2023 8:57:00 PM

You are just the sweetest lady. Thank you very much.

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/5/2023 5:06:00 AM

Your poetry is brimming with passion and affection. What a beautifully worded expression of heartache at separation from a dear one.

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/5/2023 11:31:00 AM

Thank you so much, Sotto.

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/4/2023 4:53:00 PM

So sad, the poetry is beautiful a dedication to a wonderful love. Harry

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/4/2023 5:32:00 PM

Thank you very much, Harry

Paul Callus

Date: 2/4/2023 1:39:00 AM

I am sincerely touched by this deeply emotional poem, Fin. Only those who have experienced such a loss will truly understand what you're going through. May God give you the strength to cope and find peace of mind. ~ Regards // paul

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/4/2023 5:32:00 PM

Thank you so much, Paul

Michael Tor

Date: 2/3/2023 1:01:00 PM

Fin I am so sorry for your loss. Your words pierced my heart with heartfelt pain. Only a mother who truly loves and adores her daughter can express such tender words. I lost my dad two years ago, he was in Florida when he passed I was in New York and I felt so guilty for not being there with him. We did not know he was in the hospital his new wife failed to tell us until the day he passed. I know someday you will be with her again. Jesus is good and the bible tells us we will be reunited again.

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/3/2023 4:08:00 PM

Michael, I’m so sorry for you loss. It’s sad that you didn’t get to say goodbye to your father. I’m sure though, he knows you loved him just as much. And thank you so much for your beautiful comment and favoring this piece. It means so much to me. Thank you.

Michael Tor
Date: 2/3/2023 1:19:00 PM

This one is a favorite for me. God bless you...

Charles Messina

Date: 2/2/2023 6:18:00 PM

Another heart-breaking write, Fin. So very sad, and I am so sorry for your loss. One day you will reunite with her, but until than you must keep faith and strength to keep living a happy lifestyle, you know that is what she would want. Blessings dear friend. Hugs Charlie

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/3/2023 4:03:00 PM

Thank you so much, Charles. I appreciate your heartfelt comment.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/2/2023 10:08:00 AM

Hello Fin Chuuk, yes it hurts when a love one passes away. We miss them and we cry a lot. You miss her, yet if she was sick, she would be out of pain. She is your guardian angel watching over you. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/3/2023 4:35:00 AM

Hello fin, I forgot to welcome you to Poetry soup.You are welcome. enjoy your day my friend.

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/2/2023 3:36:00 PM

Hello Darlene.. Thank you so much!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/2/2023 4:19:00 AM

I can feel your pain. You are carrying part of her in your heart that will never go away. Good memories will replace the sad ones and you will see only the good that came from having her here with you for the short time that you did. I believe that babies and children immediately go to heaven because they are not old enough to make a choice. If you have made the right choice about Jesus, then you will go to be with her. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/2/2023 3:35:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sara.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/1/2023 1:25:00 PM

this is so sad and poignant, Fin. But one day you will be reunited and it will be such a wonderful day

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/1/2023 3:22:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/31/2023 8:16:00 PM

Your thoughts touch my *heart* so deeply. This is tender and emotional, all at the same time. When the time is right, you'll see her again. Many wonderful blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/1/2023 3:21:00 PM

Brandy, you’re sweet and thank you.

Beata Agustin

Date: 1/31/2023 5:55:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts on missing your loved one through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.

Fin Chuuk
Date: 1/31/2023 8:08:00 AM

Thank you for welcoming me and your lovely comment. I appreciate it.

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 1/30/2023 10:35:00 PM

So expressive of the grief of losing your loved one Fin... Am sorry for your loss... She is safe there above, among the Angels... God bless... ~ Ani

Fin Chuuk
Date: 1/31/2023 8:07:00 AM

Thank you so much, Ani.

Joseph May

Date: 1/30/2023 7:33:00 AM

A very moving write Fin, sorry for your loss

Fin Chuuk
Date: 1/30/2023 10:16:00 AM

Thank you so much.

Justin Hensley

Date: 1/30/2023 6:46:00 AM

So moving, and sorry for your loss. It is hard to lose a child. The saying time will heal is overrated. you only learn to live with the pain and heartache. I hope you find peace until the day your meet your lovely daughter again. Best of luck in the contest!!

Fin Chuuk
Date: 1/30/2023 10:16:00 AM

Thank you so much.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/30/2023 6:11:00 AM

Your poem is filled with love and emotion. So well written --missing a beloved.

Fin Chuuk
Date: 1/30/2023 10:15:00 AM

Thank you so much.