Fin Chuuk Poet Free verse

Dear Heart

Until I see her again, my heart remains broken

There’s a special Angel up in Heaven who I miss with each beat of my heart. I suppose her purpose on earth was limited, for God took her too soon from me, and everyone else who loved her. 

She was my everything in life, my dear heart of heart. that God had blessed me with. She filled my heart with  love, and spread electrifying joy throughout my being. Life was beautiful! It was a wonderful experience to be had. But she was taken unexpectedly too soon. Like my heart was ripped out of me. And now, I feel empty and hollow.  A broken soul without its shell. 

No, I’m not mad at God. Yes, I know Heaven is pure and love. But still I break down countless times for I am a broken-hearted mother, endlessly grieving. I miss her day in and day out. She was my pride and joy, and
I never even got a chance to say goodbye.

People always say, time will heal, and you’ll see her one day. So I keep on searching for her. Waiting for a sign. Staring up in the sky for a glimpse of her. I sleeplessly await for her at night to appear and tell me, everything is alright, mom. I’m fine. 

Until I see her, my heart remains broken… I miss her!



Fin Chuuk
1/28/23

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Speaks Volumes July 20, 2023 at 1:20 AM The parting of a loved one is the hardest thing to come to terms with. Your poem is wonderful dear Fin. I miss you

Beryl Edmonds March 13, 2023 at 8:05 PM So sorry to read this Fin, my heart goes out to you with deepest sympathy… Belle Fin Chuuk March 14, 2023 at 6:19 AM Belle, your comment means a lot to me. Thank you so much.

Caren Krutsinger February 18, 2023 at 8:13 AM This twisted my heart up and ripped it into pieces, writing poetry is therapeutic for many of us. I hope and pray it will help you heal too. Fin Chuuk February 18, 2023 at 8:44 PM That is for sure. It has help helped me tremendously. Thank you, Caren :)

Joanna Daniel February 16, 2023 at 6:25 PM This is a really soulful poem, Fin, you will see her one day, plod on with that hope... Fin Chuuk February 17, 2023 at 8:53 PM Thank you, Jo :)

Kim Rodrigues February 15, 2023 at 6:19 PM Hugs…my Dad feels like that with my mom. Death is so hard. Fin Chuuk February 17, 2023 at 8:52 PM Thank you Kim :)

Mystic Rose Rose February 13, 2023 at 2:41 PM you write with so much honest and passion, I am sure she is angeling over you right now as we speak ! Fin Chuuk February 17, 2023 at 8:52 PM Thank you, Mystic :)

Unseeking Seeker February 7, 2023 at 10:25 PM Painful and sorrowful and yet we must recognise that our souls are eternal. Body dies but soul lives on. As such, we are always connected vibrationally in the ethereal domain of God’s love and light. Fin Chuuk February 8, 2023 at 4:07 PM Indeed we must! Thank you, Seeker :)

Susan Ashley February 7, 2023 at 5:23 PM Dear Fin, my eyes are misted with tears. I am genuinely and deeply moved by the outpouring of your grieving heart upon the poetic page. Your sorrow so palpable, your emotions so pure, so full of motherly love, that I'm sure the page must have wept as it absorbed your unimaginable heartbreak. So tenderly, longingly and lovingly written for your beloved daughter. I'm so sorry for your incredible loss, my friend, please accept my heartfelt condolences. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan Fin Chuuk February 8, 2023 at 4:07 PM Hello Susan, thank you so much for this sweetest comment. It means so much to me. :) ~ Fin

Kim Rodrigues February 7, 2023 at 6:46 AM Sounds like my dad, with the loss of my mom. Heartbreak indeed <3 Fin Chuuk February 7, 2023 at 4:23 PM It’s never easy :(

Valsa George February 6, 2023 at 8:51 PM Very very touching. I can gauge the depth of your sorrow... the sorrow of a mother who has lost the apple of her eye ! May God heal your broken heart ! Thanks a lot Fin for your kind visit to my page. Welcome to Poetry Soup, dear friend! Fin Chuuk February 6, 2023 at 8:59 PM Balsa, thank you so much for this heartwarming comment and welcoming. I appreciate it.

Panagiota Romios February 5, 2023 at 12:20 PM So touching Fin! Her love shows in your poetry. Panagiota xo Fin Chuuk February 6, 2023 at 8:57 PM You are just the sweetest lady. Thank you very much.

Sotto Poet February 5, 2023 at 5:06 AM Your poetry is brimming with passion and affection. What a beautifully worded expression of heartache at separation from a dear one. Fin Chuuk February 5, 2023 at 11:31 AM Thank you so much, Sotto.

Harry Horsman February 4, 2023 at 4:53 PM So sad, the poetry is beautiful a dedication to a wonderful love. Harry Fin Chuuk February 4, 2023 at 5:32 PM Thank you very much, Harry

Paul Callus February 4, 2023 at 1:39 AM I am sincerely touched by this deeply emotional poem, Fin. Only those who have experienced such a loss will truly understand what you're going through. May God give you the strength to cope and find peace of mind. ~ Regards // paul Fin Chuuk February 4, 2023 at 5:32 PM Thank you so much, Paul

Michael Tor February 3, 2023 at 1:01 PM Fin I am so sorry for your loss. Your words pierced my heart with heartfelt pain. Only a mother who truly loves and adores her daughter can express such tender words. I lost my dad two years ago, he was in Florida when he passed I was in New York and I felt so guilty for not being there with him. We did not know he was in the hospital his new wife failed to tell us until the day he passed. I know someday you will be with her again. Jesus is good and the bible tells us we will be reunited again. Fin Chuuk February 3, 2023 at 4:08 PM Michael, I’m so sorry for you loss. It’s sad that you didn’t get to say goodbye to your father. I’m sure though, he knows you loved him just as much. And thank you so much for your beautiful comment and favoring this piece. It means so much to me. Thank you. Michael Tor February 3, 2023 at 1:19 PM This one is a favorite for me. God bless you...

Charles Messina February 2, 2023 at 6:18 PM Another heart-breaking write, Fin. So very sad, and I am so sorry for your loss. One day you will reunite with her, but until than you must keep faith and strength to keep living a happy lifestyle, you know that is what she would want. Blessings dear friend. Hugs Charlie Fin Chuuk February 3, 2023 at 4:03 PM Thank you so much, Charles. I appreciate your heartfelt comment.

Darlene De Beaulieu February 2, 2023 at 10:08 AM Hello Fin Chuuk, yes it hurts when a love one passes away. We miss them and we cry a lot. You miss her, yet if she was sick, she would be out of pain. She is your guardian angel watching over you. Enjoy your day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu February 3, 2023 at 4:35 AM Hello fin, I forgot to welcome you to Poetry soup.You are welcome. enjoy your day my friend. Fin Chuuk February 2, 2023 at 3:36 PM Hello Darlene.. Thank you so much!

Sara Kendrick February 2, 2023 at 4:19 AM I can feel your pain. You are carrying part of her in your heart that will never go away. Good memories will replace the sad ones and you will see only the good that came from having her here with you for the short time that you did. I believe that babies and children immediately go to heaven because they are not old enough to make a choice. If you have made the right choice about Jesus, then you will go to be with her. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara Fin Chuuk February 2, 2023 at 3:35 PM Thank you so much, Sara.

Andrea Dietrich February 1, 2023 at 1:25 PM this is so sad and poignant, Fin. But one day you will be reunited and it will be such a wonderful day Fin Chuuk February 1, 2023 at 3:22 PM Thank you, Andrea.

Brandy Nicole January 31, 2023 at 8:16 PM Your thoughts touch my *heart* so deeply. This is tender and emotional, all at the same time. When the time is right, you'll see her again. Many wonderful blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy Fin Chuuk February 1, 2023 at 3:21 PM Brandy, you’re sweet and thank you.

Beata Agustin January 31, 2023 at 5:55 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts on missing your loved one through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you. Fin Chuuk January 31, 2023 at 8:08 AM Thank you for welcoming me and your lovely comment. I appreciate it.

Anitha Jayasankar January 30, 2023 at 10:35 PM So expressive of the grief of losing your loved one Fin... Am sorry for your loss... She is safe there above, among the Angels... God bless... ~ Ani Fin Chuuk January 31, 2023 at 8:07 AM Thank you so much, Ani.

Joseph May January 30, 2023 at 7:33 AM A very moving write Fin, sorry for your loss Fin Chuuk January 30, 2023 at 10:16 AM Thank you so much.

Justin Hensley January 30, 2023 at 6:46 AM So moving, and sorry for your loss. It is hard to lose a child. The saying time will heal is overrated. you only learn to live with the pain and heartache. I hope you find peace until the day your meet your lovely daughter again. Best of luck in the contest!! Fin Chuuk January 30, 2023 at 10:16 AM Thank you so much.

Vijay Pandit January 30, 2023 at 6:11 AM Your poem is filled with love and emotion. So well written --missing a beloved. Fin Chuuk January 30, 2023 at 10:15 AM Thank you so much.

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