Dear Guardian Angel

Dear Guardian Angel

O dear guardian angel,
   Why do you pick these wee night hours
For your dances of invisible radiance?
Aren’t  you to be leaning over 
In cradling protection while I sleep?
Instead, your cape of praises gleans
From my soul an aura so rich
That I think I, too, must rise
To join into an embroidered minuet.
Why not join instead
In some hours of respite?

 Aren’t you worn from my day of birth
 To seven decades of caring for me?
From nursing me through long hours
Of anguished inquiries?  And doesn’t
It  try you to watch my feet
Stutter across  floors with you, thus,
Saving me from too numerous falls?
My walking must sound to your ears
Like the pianist’s tinkling the keys
Along from mid to high C.

    I read, years ago, that the great
Artist Titian admitted he hadn’t really 
Seen the way to his true
 Creating process until he was 90.
I wonder now, O dear angel, how long
You will continue to dance past my bed,
Aligning with inspiration,
Since this aging poet has only recently
Discovered a trove of interior scrolls 
Needing to be shared?

Why not surround us both in the veil
Of your unfolded wings, putting
3 A.M.  voices to rest in the darkness
Of closed eyelids?  Let us dance
Our praises to God in Eden’s lullaby.

******************************************. 
(C) sally young eslinger 2020
All thanks be to Gd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 10/11/2021 11:02:00 PM
Very much enjoyed Sally!
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Date: 12/4/2020 9:31:00 PM
I love this. So beautiful and soul stirring! :=)
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 12/8/2020 9:51:00 PM
Geo, Evelyn, sister in Christ. Thanks for reading and commenting. That means a lot to me! You stay well.
Date: 12/4/2020 7:33:00 PM
Hi Sally! What a great poem! I’m sure God and your guardian angel our touched by this. I’m sure it isn’t every day that angels guard someone who is compassionate for them like you seem to be, instead of taking them for granted like so many people do. Keep writing poems like it! God bless you!
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Date: 12/8/2020 9:51:00 PM
Thanks, Jennifer. I give my angels too uch work not to worry about them. Haha. I actually get much comfort from their presence here between me and Jim p, who has slept on the sofa close by ever since we moved downstairs to the LR after my coma in 2018. He has chronic illness too, so the angels stay busy with their blessing prayers. Many blessings to you!
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Date: 12/8/2020 9:47:00 PM
Thanks, Jennifer. I give my angels too uch work not to worry about them. Haha. I actually get much comfort from their presence here between me and Jim p, who has slept on the sofa close by ever since we moved downstairs to the LR after my coma in 2018. He has chronic illness too, so the angels stay busy with their blessing prayers. Many blessings to you!
Date: 12/4/2020 5:04:00 PM
Angels never tire of watching over you day or night dear poet, I think they are watching you extra closely, because they are fond of your beautiful sensitive heart. be well, and keep writing, I enjoyed your verse today.
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 12/8/2020 9:51:00 PM
Hi! and thank you for your generous comment. I also do not actually believe angels ever grow tired of attending their charges or tasks. The question was more rhetorical in response to my tiring of myself and emphasizing thus their strength, patience and beauty. Be well.
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 12/8/2020 9:35:00 PM
Hi! and thank you for your generous comment. I also do not actually believe angels ever grow tired of attending their charges or tasks. The question was more rhetorical in response to my tiring of myself and emphasizing thus their strength, patience and beauty. Be well.
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