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Dear Alive Alice In Wonderland

Dear Alive Alice in Wonderland You were truly always the motivated one Who only wanted best things to be done But for someone receiving so much abuse There never will ever be a perfect excuse. Your mind you may have fixed and set Which we often do with much regret As days of abuse increase and increase Reach a point where him have to release. At times we really try to be realistical Other person was one enormously egotistical With an identity crisis who is now gone More pictures in poems you will have drawn. James Thomas Horn Retired Veteran PS. It is truly hard to have let remorse take its course.

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Date: 9/23/2014 1:10:00 PM
Jim . . . a different, but very interesting take on "Alice in Wonderland." At least it's good to know that Alice is Alive in this instance. I guess the "more pictures in poems you will have drawn" is Alice's release mechanism metaphorically . Great Write!! Cheers, Gary
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Date: 9/23/2014 1:27:00 PM
Thanks Gary. Hope she has a chance to read this. This was in response to her questioning my response to her. This definitely is an emotional outlet for some people. Jim

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